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Post by ghoulgirl on Apr 20, 2011 9:51:25 GMT -5
I cannot believe we had a chapter with Nathan! I had forgotten about him! LOL Thanks for another great chapter! Can't wait until tomorrow's installment!
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Post by addictedtodool on Apr 20, 2011 15:16:22 GMT -5
I think that they are going to move in together! And bring Caroline to the house so they can take care of her! Ok, maybe not. I want them to though. Caroline is great entertainment!
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Post by Pallison on Apr 20, 2011 18:50:23 GMT -5
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Post by Kpatch on Apr 21, 2011 4:02:29 GMT -5
KIRIAKIS MANSION, POOLSIDE
Victor and Maggie are wearing robes, drinking their morning coffee and sharing a newspaper. Victor: The market had a good day yesterday. He looks over at Maggie and smiles. So did I. Maggie smiles back. Maggie: Victor, if you keep looking at me that way, you’re going to make me blush. Victor: That’s my objective. Maggie: As much as I’d like to talk about us all day long, I ... there’s something else on my mind. Victor: Mine too. Caroline. Maggie: Yes. Caroline. You know she’s in a nursing home. Victor: Yes, but it’s temporary. Until Bo can make other arrangements. Maggie: I’d like to go visit her today. Victor: Excellent idea. Let’s get dressed.
SALEM NURSING HOME
Maggie and Victor walk into Caroline’s room. She’s sitting in a chair near the window and looks over at them as they enter. She gets teary-eyed and throws her arms around Victor.
Caroline: I’m so glad you came. Victor: How are you feeling, Caroline? Caroline: I feel like I’m in prison here. Maggie: Bo is arranging a better situation for you. Caroline: I don’t want a better situation. I want to go home. Now! Victor and Maggie look at each other. Caroline: Well! What’s the delay? I want you to take me home now. Victor: We’re not exactly set up for ... Caroline: I don’t want to hear any excuses, Shawn. You will take me home with you today! Maggie: Oh this isn’t ... Victor: Caroline darlin’, yer gonna have to be patient. We wanta be sure everything’s perfect for ye when ye come home. Caroline: You’re a good man, Shawn. I should have known you’d only have my best interest at heart. Victor: Of course. Caroline: I love you. Victor: And I love you. Victor puts his arms around Caroline and holds her tight and Maggie watches. Victor: You have a good night now, darlin’. We’ll be back soon. Caroline: Thank you. Good night Shawn.
To be continued ...
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Post by MrsM on Apr 21, 2011 7:55:22 GMT -5
Ooooh, this will put a craw in Maggie's undergarments.
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Post by sportsgirl on Apr 21, 2011 8:10:00 GMT -5
Maggie should not get upset by this... Upset maybe seeing Caroline like this yes! Poor Caroline thinking Victor is Shawn, she is really in bad shape. So glad they are finally helping her.
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Post by DancingDays on Apr 21, 2011 8:40:27 GMT -5
It's hard to imagine Victor with an Irish accent, but somehow it works. LOL ;D
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Post by addictedtodool on Apr 21, 2011 16:23:35 GMT -5
I think Mags will love him all the more for being tender with Caroline. Way to have a heart, Victor. I hope jkjpatch doesn't go all rogue now; we still have a ways to go in this story and you know how she loves to "get" us.
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Post by fluffysmom on Apr 21, 2011 18:21:41 GMT -5
I really like this story and can't wait to see what twist lies ahead. Great dialogue Kpatch!
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Post by ghoulgirl on Apr 21, 2011 22:41:27 GMT -5
Wasn't expecting that but I totally enjoyed it! Lol at victor doing an iris accent! I think Maggie will be weirded out with it but ultimately ok!
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Post by Kpatch on Apr 22, 2011 4:53:25 GMT -5
VICTOR’S CAR
Victor is driving back toward Maggie’s house. Victor: Maggie, I’d like to explain ... Maggie: You don’t need to explain anything. I understand exactly why you did what you did and why you said what you said. Victor: I’m not sure you do. Maggie: What do you mean? Victor: I was stunned that Caroline didn’t recognize me. That she thought I was Shawn. Maggie: I think she just recognized you as someone she once loved very much. And she needed to hear you say you loved her. Victor: But I do. I do love her. Maggie: I know you do. Victor: You know? Maggie: She’s the mother of your first-born son. I know she holds a special place in your heart. Victor: And she always will. Maggie: You don’t need to explain your actions to me. I thought it was a great kindness. Victor: I’ve never been known for my kindness. Maggie: Until now. Victor takes Maggie’s hand and kisses it as they drive silently the rest of the way home.
To be continued tomorrow (yes, that’s right, tomorrow) ...
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Post by André DiMera on Apr 22, 2011 7:30:36 GMT -5
Well, at least Maggie isn't too angry with Victor for telling Caroline that he loves her. Then again, Maggie has always been very understanding, to my knowledge.
Excellent chapter, jkjpatch!
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Post by MrsM on Apr 22, 2011 8:12:55 GMT -5
We get a chapter on Saturday? I hope it is a happy one. I will probably have to wait to read it until I get home from the funeral.
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Post by gapeach on Apr 22, 2011 15:18:27 GMT -5
yeah a Saturday chapter. Great story girl... loving Victor and Maggie together.
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Post by sportsgirl on Apr 22, 2011 15:21:54 GMT -5
YAY!!! A Saturday special!!!! Thanks!!
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