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Post by DancingDays on Feb 24, 2012 9:46:37 GMT -5
Lovely little story. And I like that you left it (sort of) open for a continuation. Well done!! ;D
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Post by mae00 on Feb 24, 2012 10:01:19 GMT -5
When did Abby reveal that the person centered around her feelings was Austin? I missed that part I guess. Will have to go back and re-read the story again. Maybe I"m mixing the show with the fan-fic again....
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Post by gapeach on Feb 24, 2012 10:18:55 GMT -5
Love how you wrapped this story up!! Also glad that Abigail realized that the 'relationship' with Austin was all in her head... now if the writer's can resolve the story the same way!!
Can't wait for the next jkjpatch creation.
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Post by fluffysmom on Feb 24, 2012 10:28:20 GMT -5
Great ending to the story Kpatch. I'm glad that Abby and Jack are close again and that JJ is coming to visit them.
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Post by djm on Feb 24, 2012 10:40:40 GMT -5
Loved the ending. I even like Abby agian now that she admitts that there was nothing between her and Austin. So happy that JJ is coming. Jack and Abby can use a visit from him. Thanks for the story Kpatch.
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Post by sportsgirl on Feb 24, 2012 10:54:12 GMT -5
I'm with Donna... So glad Abigail sees the truth w/Austin and it's not making her psycho and glad JJ's coming back...
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Post by André DiMera on Feb 24, 2012 10:59:43 GMT -5
Whoa! That was a great chapter! Jack had some awesome character development here. Plus, I like how it's open for a possible sequel in future! This was a great story, jkjpatch! I can't wait to see what you have for us next!
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Post by Kpatch on Feb 24, 2012 15:45:49 GMT -5
Thanks so much, everyone, for your readership and great comments. I'm glad you enjoyed this short story. It was a little disconcerting to me that it ended up being so close to what was going on, on-air, but that happens sometimes.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. My next story starts Monday, and we're heading back to the All My Exes/Passions saga. I'll be posting a promo shortly.
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Post by slyn11 on Feb 26, 2012 14:24:48 GMT -5
That was a really great ending. I like how Abigail and Jack essentially learned the same lesson. Great stuff about projecting feelings... Maybe one day you'll do a sequel and show where the father daughter duo goes from here.
But I will admit I was bummed there was no real Abigail and Austin affair....yep I like things super soapy.
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