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Post by krw627 on Feb 14, 2012 13:39:12 GMT -5
Another great story!!
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Post by sportsgirl on Feb 14, 2012 13:41:22 GMT -5
I also forgot that you solved the Halloween mystery.. That has never been brought up on the show, even though it was probably Jack.
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Post by rockfordfosgate on Feb 14, 2012 15:47:50 GMT -5
So many great lines. Princess Katerina, Bill being a fox and everyone agreeing, the 45 other states, he's not a prize want him back?
When I hit the part about the candlestick maker, I just about died laughing. You even tied up a 'forgotten' story with the mysterious Halloween costume-wearer. Brilliant, just brilliant!
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Post by Kpatch on Feb 14, 2012 21:00:27 GMT -5
Thanks so much for reading this fun little story. Sounds like you all liked the humor and that makes me very happy.
I actually tried to write the story as a straight drama and I couldn't do it. Bo and Hope have been buffoons lately and I couldn't write them any which way but stupid. Adding Dick and Molly to introduce the story helped me bring it all together.
Next up: Tune in tomorrow for the start of History Lessons, a Jack & Jennifer fanfic for J&J fans and non-fans alike.
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Post by MrsM on Feb 14, 2012 21:02:06 GMT -5
Yay!! Can't wait!!!!!
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Post by djm on Feb 15, 2012 9:24:35 GMT -5
Thanks for the great story. I agree that Bill is a fox as well. 48 states??? Think I will have to go and look at a map again. Love that Dan and Mel have to give back the Christmas ornament. Oh I will add a mumber 1 to the order.
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Post by mae00 on Feb 15, 2012 10:07:16 GMT -5
Awesome story jkjpatch!!! Love the way it ended........with the exception that Carly is still around **hint, hint**  |
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Post by Trey on Feb 17, 2012 16:26:56 GMT -5
Love it! Great finale and love the "we/I knows" regarding the fox comment.
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