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Post by angelatil on May 6, 2012 23:51:13 GMT -5
oh wow....this story...omg. I am so sorry it has taken me forever to catch up with part 1. But wow....this story is absolutely amazing!!!
I love Sonny and Melanie for one....so great a friendship!! And Victor and Philip had tears in my eyes...just wow. And Melanie running and praying? OMG that scene just tore at my heart. Melanie...wow Melanie just soooo loves Philip!!! You wrote her character and Chloe character so true to themselves and their interaction with Philip. And Philip feeling his baby and reacting....<sigh> so great!
And now it looks like Philip might be coming back?? Oh I hope so!! I can not wait to start reading part 2 of this story!!!
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Post by Minako98 on Jun 27, 2012 14:29:00 GMT -5
Ok I purposely waited a while before I read this... it took me a few days, but OMG, slyn...
Now I know not to read your stuff from work. I'm crying over here!
Awesome writing and the way you have captured each characters voice/essence is nothing short of brilliant.
Thank you for such an amazing story.
Off to start Undertow 2!!
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Post by slyn11 on Jun 28, 2012 12:19:26 GMT -5
Ok I purposely waited a while before I read this... it took me a few days, but OMG, slyn... Now I know not to read your stuff from work. I'm crying over here! Awesome writing and the way you have captured each characters voice/essence is nothing short of brilliant. Thank you for such an amazing story. Off to start Undertow 2!! Thank you so much. I am so glad you enjoyed the story. I get so nervous when I share my writing. I am glad JKJPatch convinced me to start posting here. Although I am sorry I made you cry at work. I hate when that happens to me, people look at me strangely. LOL |
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Post by slyn11 on Jun 14, 2013 13:57:14 GMT -5
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