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Post by fluffysmom on Apr 1, 2012 22:03:46 GMT -5
My favorite line was the last, when Chloe said she wouldn't let go of Philip, not ever. Thanks for volume 1 of your story. I am sooo ready for the next part of the journey. I loved that line too. |
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Post by Kpatch on Apr 1, 2012 22:06:08 GMT -5
Slyn, I have the ultimate compliment for you. I read this update instead of watching Mad Men.
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Post by slyn11 on Apr 2, 2012 13:04:59 GMT -5
Awesome update slyn! You had me crying! So glad that I was at home reading this and not at work!! Can't wait for the next installment! Crying at work is never a good thing. I recently did this while watching GH at work, people were staring at me in horror. I am so glad you enjoyed this! We got so much more to go! |
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Post by slyn11 on Apr 2, 2012 13:11:06 GMT -5
I love Chloe and Parker together getting through to Philip. It was the perfect ending to part 1 of the story. I loved this line. "I just wanted him to have his family even if it was only for a little while." One of the first things I ever wrote for this story was Chloe's bedside chat with Philip. I knew I wanted her to be the one to get through to him. Parker originally was not there...but then I realized he sort of had to be. We needed Philip to come back to his family...so all four of them in the room made sense. Thank you so much for your kind comments. I am glad you are enjoying it. |
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Post by slyn11 on Apr 2, 2012 13:25:28 GMT -5
Had me crying too. It's good that Melanie and Chloe were both honest with each other and now Melanie knows what really did and didn't happen at the Towers. They have so much in common with Philip being the first love for both of them, and how he made them each feel like a princess. My favorite line was the last, when Chloe said she wouldn't let go of Philip, not ever. Thanks for volume 1 of your story. I am sooo ready for the next part of the journey. Chloe and Melanie parallel quite a bit in Undertow. Their sad childhoods, their first love of Philip, finding family later in life, feeling like each is stealing something from the other etc I had a feeling you would like the last line.  Thanks so much for reading and for the Mad Men compliment...made me smile. ;D |
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Post by gapeach on Apr 2, 2012 16:54:40 GMT -5
Awesome update slyn! You had me crying! So glad that I was at home reading this and not at work!! Can't wait for the next installment! Had me crying too and I AM at work!! |
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Post by slyn11 on Apr 3, 2012 19:18:18 GMT -5
A/N - So part two of Undertow starts later this week (I'm thinking Thursday). I will post a link to the new thread for that part of the story here and in my discussion thread. I hope everyone will stick around for the rest of it. Philip is back and things get a lot more interesting whenever he is added to the mix. There will also be good stuff for fans of Chad, Sonny, Drew, Brady and more. I've been having fun writing it...angsty fun though. It is still me writing, so expect some heartache. ;D
UNDERTOW 2 myhourglass.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=generalauthors&thread=3284&page=1#85859
The management of the board is making a few changes. They are making the fiction section visible to members only.
What does that mean?
Well I know tons of us like to pass through and read stories on the fly. I do it myself. Well, now they want everyone to become a member of the site, to enjoy the stories here. I think that is a pretty fair exchange. They have created this nice place for us to chat, the least we could do is join in. I know many of the eyeballs that are reading Undertow are not the chatty type...so joining the board doesn't mean you HAVE to comment. We just hope that you do. At least I do. I love hearing what everyone thinks about what I am writing.
OK so in support of the upcoming change on the board and to celebrate/commemorate the end of "book1" of Undertow. I will be offering a PDF version of the complete story to any member that sends me a message.
Why would you want a pdf of this story?
Good question. Usually when I finish a fanfic I share a pdf of the entire thing, just in case anyone wants to re-read it in one swoop, or if they want it on an ereader etc. I don't know if it is a common practice in DAYS fandom, but in other fandoms it is.
Thanks again for all the support. I really appreciate it. So send me a message if you're interested.
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Post by sportsgirl on Apr 4, 2012 11:15:02 GMT -5
Finally got caught up! OMG Slyn, what a beautiful story...You truly have such a romantic soul & it shows up in your writing... I can't wait for #2.
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Post by gapeach on Apr 4, 2012 11:32:01 GMT -5
Sent my request for PDF.
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Post by slyn11 on Apr 4, 2012 17:25:36 GMT -5
Finally got caught up! OMG Slyn, what a beautiful story...You truly have such a romanric soul & it shows up in your writing... I can't wait for #2. What a sweet thing to say. I am going to have to show this comment to my husband. He claims he is the romantic one in our relationship. LOL Thanks so much.  |
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Post by slyn11 on Apr 4, 2012 17:25:59 GMT -5
OK I think I got all the PDF requests filled. If I missed you, let me know!
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Post by MrsM on Apr 4, 2012 20:53:15 GMT -5
Wow. That is all I can say.
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Post by jc20886 on Apr 6, 2012 14:46:38 GMT -5
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this is such a great story and fantistic writing love it
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Post by jc20886 on Apr 6, 2012 14:47:48 GMT -5
this is such a great story and fantistic writing love it
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Post by slyn11 on Apr 6, 2012 20:02:25 GMT -5
this is such a great story and fantistic writing love it Thank you so much! ;D |
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