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Post by djm on Jul 4, 2011 12:45:12 GMT -5
Wow. How crazy is the Salem PD. Jan did not seem to know that no matter where they go they will be followed. Can't wait to see the chase. Great Story Andre.
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Post by André DiMera on Jul 5, 2011 8:58:21 GMT -5
Chapter 9 JAN'S HOUSE There is a bang on the door. BO (Voice only, yelling): Open up! We've got the house surrounded! Come out with your hands in the air! Nothing happened. Then, Bo kicked the door down. He, Roman, John, Marlena, and Belle walked into the house. BO: We split up. Roman, you take the upstairs, I'll search the ground level. ROMAN: You got it, little brother. Bo and Roman ran off to another part of the house. BELLE: I wonder if Shawn's all right. If he's even alive. MARLENA: Sweetie Girl, it's okay. Jan Spears might be crazy, but she's not crazy enough to murder Shawn. After a few minutes, Bo and Roman returned. BO: We searched the entire house. There's no sign of either of them. They must have made a run for it. BELLE: Well, where did they go? Roman got out the tracking device and typed something in it. ROMAN: Well, I might have known it. SALEM INN Jan and Shawn-D, still handcuffed together, walked into the reception area. JAN: Excuse me. RECEPTIONIST: Yes? JAN: My husband and I need a room. RECEPTIONIST: How long do you plan on staying? JAN: Just one night. RECEPTIONIST: Name? JAN: Spears. Shawn and Jan Spears. RECEPTIONIST: Okay, Mrs. Spears. That will be $73. Jan handed the receptionist a large sum of money. The receptionist handed Jan a key. RECEPTIONIST: Room 134. Jan and Shawn-D walked away from the reception desk. HOTEL ROOM Jan and Shawn-D walked into their hotel room. Jan automatically un-handcuffed herself and Shawn-D. She also chained Shawn-D to the bed of their room. This time, however, she only chained his feet. She handcuffed his hands together. |
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Post by fluffysmom on Jul 5, 2011 9:07:55 GMT -5
I can't believe she used her real name. Jan, I can't wait to see what you come up with next. I wonder if Bo & Roman will finally solve a case.
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Post by sportsgirl on Jul 5, 2011 9:10:09 GMT -5
At least she used cash to pay instead of a credit card, but yeah, dumb using her real name.
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Post by Kpatch on Jul 5, 2011 12:40:42 GMT -5
Oh I was so worried when you sent Roman upstairs that he wouldn't come down and we'd never see him again.
Jan is absolutely certifiable.
I am anxious for Shawn to be found and reunited with Belle!
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Post by Trey on Jul 5, 2011 13:56:58 GMT -5
She used her own name? What a great idea, Salem PD will never use her name (too simple). LOL
Good story, can't wait to see what Shawn does.
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Post by djm on Jul 5, 2011 14:02:34 GMT -5
Boy what a smart idea. Pay in cash. Sounds like she used her real name, but gave extra cash to make sure no one is told the real name. I am betting the tracking chip thing will find them again. Thanks Andre. I am realy enjoying your story.
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Post by André DiMera on Jul 6, 2011 8:03:12 GMT -5
Chapter 10 JAN'S HOUSE BELLE: What did you find? BO: They're at the Salem Inn. BELLE: That's where Mom, Dad, and I are staying. BO: Well, let's go and get Shawn, then. Shall we? Bo, Roman, John, Belle, and Marlena left. SALEM INN JAN: Well, that was fast work. I think I'll go take a shower, now. Jan headed towards the bathroom. SHAWN-D: Jan, wait. Jan turned back. JAN: Yes, Shawn? SHAWN-D: These chains...they're a little tight. Do you think you could loosen them a bit? Or, just take them off of me all together? JAN: I can't do that, Shawn. SHAWN-D: Why not? JAN: Because, the King of the Potato People won't let me! SHAWN-D: What? JAN: I begged with him! I got down on my knees and pleaded! He wants me to keep you here...keep you here for ten years! SHAWN-D: Jan, what are you talking about? JAN: Oh, sorry. That's “Red Dwarf”, not “Days of Our Lives”. What I meant to say was that, if I take those chains off, you'll run away. I can't let that happen. If I lost you again...it would break my heart. You don't want me to have a broken heart, do you? Shawn-D thought carefully about this for a moment. SHAWN-D: No. I guess not. JAN: Good. Jan headed toward the shower again, but stopped herself and turned around. JAN: Well... SHAWN-D: What? JAN: I guess... SHAWN-D: What is it, Jan? JAN: I guess...I guess there's no real harm in unchaining you for a few minutes. Just while I'm in the shower. As long as you promise not to run off. Jan took the key from her pocket and unlocked the chains around Shawn-D's ankles. Shawn-D stood up. JAN: There we go. Now, remember, you promised. Jan headed towards the shower for a third time. SHAWN-D: Jan? Jan looked back at Shawn-D. SHAWN-D: Thank you. Shawn-D smiled at Jan. Jan smiled back at him and then went into the bathroom. Once Jan shut the door, Shawn-D quickly and quietly ran out the door. He made sure to make as little noise as possible, so as not to make Jan suspicious. Shawn-D broke his promise. He ran off. |
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Post by sportsgirl on Jul 6, 2011 8:16:18 GMT -5
Ok, now I thought Jan to be certifiable loony but dumb? Wow. completely stupid comes to mind! What an ego!
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Post by Kpatch on Jul 6, 2011 8:33:55 GMT -5
Potato people? OMG. That's hilarious. I don't know anything about Red Dwarf, but I think maybe I should.
I hope Shawn meets up with his family. I worry about Jan though. She's N.U.T.S. nuts.
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Post by fluffysmom on Jul 6, 2011 9:59:02 GMT -5
Shawn run for your life. Jan is nuttier than we even thought. I can hardly wait to see what happens next.
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Post by André DiMera on Jul 6, 2011 10:09:06 GMT -5
For those of you who are confused about the 2 lines Jan had about the King of the Potato People, it was taken from a British science-fiction sitcom called "Red Dwarf". Here is the original scene from "Red Dwarf":
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Post by fluffysmom on Jul 6, 2011 10:59:53 GMT -5
Thanks Andre!
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Post by Trey on Jul 6, 2011 11:12:41 GMT -5
Ha! Potato People (sounds like my kind of people).
I'm glad Shawn's free!
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Post by ghoulgirl on Jul 6, 2011 11:22:46 GMT -5
I'm so glad Shawn is free. Thanks for another great chapter Andre!
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