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Post by Tom Horton on Aug 4, 2011 9:05:59 GMT -5
I think my boyish good looks, endless charisma, and obvious charm brought out the maternal instinct in them. Maybe it was his modesty  Great Chapter! |
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Post by DancingDays on Aug 4, 2011 10:26:23 GMT -5
I hate to say it, but I have a major complaint with this story. 24 hours is too long to wait between chapters!!! :-P I wanna know RIGHT NOW what happens next. Such a great story!
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Post by fluffysmom on Aug 4, 2011 15:43:56 GMT -5
I can't wait to see how Jack gets away from his captors. Great story Kpatch!
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Post by ghoulgirl on Aug 4, 2011 20:01:03 GMT -5
Jkjpatch always knows how to weave an amazing tale that you can't help but be addicted to.
WOW! I Cannot wait for tomorrows chapter.
I feel like I am betraying myself by liking a story with Jack in it! LOL
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Post by Kpatch on Aug 5, 2011 5:38:20 GMT -5
PAKISTAN
I thought it was too dangerous to try to access my personal email account using this computer. Then I remembered my “blog” ... the one the Navy started for me so they could maintain my walkabout “cover.” But I couldn’t very well say, “Having a great time with the bin Ladens. Wish you were here.” I needed to be a bit more subtle. Jennifer always said that subtlety wasn’t my strong suit, and she was right.
Then the lightbulb moment dawned and I started to type like mad. I posted the Sunsets haiku that my friend Darin wrote. If he's alive, he would recognize it for sure, and would know without a doubt it was me who was posting it.
I knew it was risky to post anything online from this computer, but I didn’t have much of a choice. I couldn’t stay here forever and if they were going to kill me because of it ... well, they probably were going to kill me anyway. It’s a chance I had to take.
Shortly after I posted the haiku, the women came back. They seemed to be eyeing me with suspicion, although it could have just been my imagination. They took the laptop computer away and left the room. That was the last time I ever saw them.
To be continued Monday...
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Post by Tom Horton on Aug 5, 2011 7:23:56 GMT -5
Yay Jack! Smart thinking!
Yay Kpatch! Smart writing!
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Post by sportsgirl on Aug 5, 2011 7:53:08 GMT -5
don't forget YAY Jack for remembering the Haiku..what a memory!
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Post by MrsM on Aug 5, 2011 10:31:30 GMT -5
Ahhhh!!! How am I gonna make it till Monday!!!!  ? |
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Post by ghoulgirl on Aug 5, 2011 12:31:28 GMT -5
Can we pretty Please have some weekend spoilers? I don't think I can wait til Monday!!
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Post by DancingDays on Aug 5, 2011 12:50:26 GMT -5
AAHH! You left it there?!?! Previews at least? Pretty please?  |
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Post by Kpatch on Aug 5, 2011 13:24:39 GMT -5
^^ Yes, previews can be arranged. Mrs M and DJM usually help to arrange it with some coconut and rum combination. <Hint>
Glad you are finding the story intriguing!
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Post by MrsM on Aug 5, 2011 13:38:47 GMT -5
Pretty please with an umbrella straw???  |
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Post by djm on Aug 5, 2011 15:06:34 GMT -5
Boy Jack was smart thinking. Hope someone gets the message. Can't wait till Monday. Previews please sending ice cream covered with chocolate and a cherry on top. Thanks for the chapter Kpatch. Looking forward to the previews and Monday's chapter.
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Post by fluffysmom on Aug 5, 2011 16:11:24 GMT -5
Great chapter Kpatch! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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Post by Kpatch on Aug 6, 2011 6:50:19 GMT -5
Monday
All hell breaks loose!
Tuesday
Jack wraps up his article.
Wednesday
Jennifer and Abby finish reading the article. They get an unexpected call.
Thursday
Jennifer talks about the future with Daniel. Will she make the right decision?
Friday
Tune in for the conclusion of Living Dangerously.
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Great Chapter! 
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