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Post by terry on Mar 29, 2014 10:07:06 GMT -5
Chapter 1 (Scene 1- Undisclosed Location- Later Revealed to be in Paris, France)
In a facility in Paris, there is a man in a hospital bed and it looks like he has been in a coma for a very long time. Of course the man's face is not revealed as the mystery patient's doctor she comes back to check in on this mystery patient as she wonders if there has been any progress as she wonders if he will ever wake up from his coma as she starts to give up hope when the mystery patient moves his hand. She then comes back into his room just as she was about to leave, the mystery patient's monitors start going off as he starts to wake up as his eyes open as the mystery patient wakes up from his coma.
The mystery patient's face is revealed...it is Jack Deveraux back from the dead!!!!!
Jack then says to her "Where am I?" She says "You are in Paris, France, Mr. Deveraux!" Jack then said "How did I get here?" She then says to Jack "I don't know how you got here but do you know what year it is?" Jack then says "Of course I do...it's 2012!" The doctor then looks away for a second as she says to Jack "Mr. Deveraux it is not 2012...it is 2014!" Jack then says "There is no way that that's possible...you're meaning to tell me that I've been in a coma for over 2 years?" The doctor then says "Yes you have been in a coma for 2 years but as for how you got here now that is a mystery because you came to be in my hospital...in my clinic...because I guess someone brought you here?"
Jack then says "Well whoever it was that brought me here, do you remember what this person looks like or even who they are?" The doctor of course looks away because she knows exactly how Jack came to be in her care for these past 2 years as she lies right through her teeth saying "No...I don't know anything...nothing at all!"
Scene 2- Horton House (Salem)
Jennifer is looking at the mantle of pictures of her family when Daniel comes into the room and when he does he says "Jennifer, just what are you doing?" Jennifer then says "Nothing...I was just looking at the pictures of Gram & Grandpa, looking at photos of Aunt Maggie & Uncle Mickey, looking at pictures of Abby, J.J. and Jack but I guess I want to make new memories by having our photo up there on the mantle!"
Daniel he then says to Jennifer "Well I am glad that you said that because I have something for you, something that I have literally have been wanting to give to you for a while now...something that is long overdue!"
Daniel then out of nowhere gets down on one knee takes a ring box from out of his back pocket and opens it right in front of Jennifer saying "Jennifer Rose Horton Deveraux, will you do me the honor of becoming my wife?" Daniel then says "Will you marry me?"
Jennifer of course is shocked by this proposal as she is literally beaming from ear to ear in excitement as she is tearing up as she says "Yes Daniel...yes I'll marry you!"
Daniel puts the ring on Jennifer's finger and when he does he gets up from off the ground as he kisses her as she kisses him back as Daniel then says "So are you ready to tell everyone the good news about our engagement?"
Jennifer then says "Yes I think I should tell Abby and J.J. the good news first before telling the rest of the family!" Daniel then says "I think I'll tell Mom and Victor the good news but I obviously have to call Melanie and tell her the good news but I am definitely going to tell Parker!"
Jennifer then says "I'm sure Aunt Maggie will be so excited just like how Melanie will be too and so will Parker!" Daniel then says "Just like how I'm sure Abby and J.J. will be happy for us but I can think of certain people who won't be happy!"
Scene 3- Kiriakis Mansion (Salem)
Brady is drinking in the living room when Victor and Maggie walk in as Maggie looks on disappointed as she can't help but watch Brady self-destruct as Victor has finally had enough as Victor then yells out Brady's name by saying "Brady!!!!!!!!!" Brady then turns around to see Victor and Maggie standing there as he says "Granddad...Maggie...what are you guys doing here or what do you guys want?"
Victor then says "Brady when is enough finally going to be enough? Don't you see what you are doing to Maggie, don't you see what you are doing to everyone else in this family?"
Brady then says "Well Granddad I'm just giving into my baser instincts and quite honestly I don't care anymore what anyone has to say about it...not you, not Maggie, not Marlena, not my damn father!"
Victor then says "Well Brady...since you don't care anymore then why should I?" Maggie then says "Victor!!!" Maggie tries to stop Victor from taking things too far as he says "No Maggie...Brady needs to see that his actions won't be tolerated anymore!" Victor then asks Brady by saying "Do you hear me Brady? I've had it with you, your boozing, your drugs, all of it, I am done!" Brady then says "So old man, what do you plan on doing? I am sure it is nothing that I haven't seen or gone through already what could be worse?"
Victor then says "Oh I am afraid this will be...Brady effective immediately you are fired from Titan...do you hear me? You are no longer the CEO of this company!" This shocks Brady as Brady then says "You can't do this!" Victor then says "It's already been done...I'm still the Chairman of the Board...I still am the Chairman of this company and what I say goes!"
Victor then says "You are to clean out your desk when you get to the office...you are no longer allowed anywhere near Titan!" Victor then says "If you think that was the end of what I have in store...then you are in for the shock of your life right now...Brady you have officially and legally been disinherited from my will...your assets have been frozen and any attempt to access them will be denied!"
Victor then says to Brady "You are to leave here...leave...and never come back do you hear me? You are being forced out...you no longer live here anymore and as for your bags they have already been packed for you...Henderson packed them and they're waiting for you in the foyer!" Victor then says "Brady if you even think about coming back to this house you will be arrested immediately!"
Maggie tries to get Victor to reconsider but his mind has been made up as Brady then says "Granddad you have taken everything from me...I have lost everything now but make no mistake about it, that I will fight you on this every step of the way...this isn't over not by a long shot!"
Victor then says "Oh yes it is because I am washing my hands of you Brady because I am sick and tired of watching you self-destruct but destroying not only this family but my company and I'm having none of it anymore!"
Brady then ends up leaving the living room as Maggie is practically crying her eyes out as Victor is ice-cold as Brady then goes out to the foyer to get his bags and when he does he ends up leaving the Kiriakis Mansion as Henderson shuts the door behind Brady as he leaves the mansion looking at it one last time as he has not only been cut off but seemingly disowned
Scene 4-(Brady Pub) (Salem)
Eric and Nicole are inside the Pub talking about their engagement when Caroline comes walking towards their table and when she does she sees her grandson as she says to him "Eric, so what is it that you want to order?" Eric then says "Well Grandma Nicole and I are not here to order anything well at least not yet because what we have to tell you is actually good news!"
Nicole shows off her engagement ring as she says to Caroline "Eric and I...are getting married...Eric proposed to me and I said yes!" Just when Caroline is about to say something to Nicole, Sami walks into the Brady Pub and when she does she overhears the last part of what Nicole had to say as she says "You have got to be kidding me!"
Scene 5 (DiMera Mansion) (Salem)
Stefano is on the phone with a mysterious doctor as Stefano then says to him "So is it done?" The doctor then says "Yes it is...I lied to Mr. DiMera...he has no idea that Ms. Deveraux is really pregnant with his baby after all!" Stefano then says "Excellent work...and after this excellent work you will definitely be rewarded for your discretion all right?" The doctor then says "Is there anything else that you need me to do Mr. DiMera?"
Stefano then says to the doctor "No that'll be all for now...Ciao!!!!!!!" Stefano gets off the phone and when he does there is a knock on the door, Stefano says "Harold will you get the door please?"
Harold then goes to get the door and when he does open the door he answers the door to find his youngest son Chad at the door, Chad is back in Salem
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Post by gapeach on Mar 29, 2014 14:01:06 GMT -5
Wow. Jack is alive, Daniel & Jennifer engaged, Nicole & Ric engaged, Abby pregnant with EJ's baby. This is going to be good. Oh yeah and Brady kicked out and disinherited.
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Post by terry on Mar 29, 2014 14:42:44 GMT -5
Yes and expect more things to come too, as for Brady this is the start of him hitting rock-bottom and as for how Brady picks himself back up, you just have to wait and see and as for Abby still being pregnant with EJ's baby and then Abby's ex EJ's brother Chad being back in town just complicates things now more
And for Nicole and Eric being engaged, there still lies the secret that Nicole is keeping
As for Jack being alive, as for how he got to the clinic in Paris, expect another twist and as for Daniel and Jennifer being engaged on top of Jack being alive complicates things
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Post by terry on Mar 29, 2014 17:45:59 GMT -5
Chapter 2 (Scene 1- Pier) (Salem)
Brady has just lost everything as he has not only been cut off financially by his grandfather Victor but he has been fired from Titan too and kicked out of his family home, Brady has just hit rock bottom. His phone rings and when he does he sees that it's Theresa. Brady wonders if he should pick up the call as he decides to ignore Theresa's call and when he does Brady then is about to take a drink from a flask he had in his pocket when John happens upon the pier happening upon his son.
Brady then says "Oh my God, what the hell do you want Dad?" John then said "Brady I had no idea that you would be here on the pier...I happened to come down here because I needed a place to get away and I came down here but to my surprise I run into you!" Brady then says "Well Dad are you proud of yourself? Isn't there anything you wouldn't do to destroy my life any more than you already have?" John then says "Brady I don't know what you are talking about...I have no idea what you are talking about...if this is about Kristen then!"
Brady says "Oh my God Dad no this is not about Kristen but it is part of the reason, it is you, it's Eric, it's Marlena, everything!" Brady then said "I have lost everything because not only did Granddad cut me off without a dime he fired me from Titan too and he kicked me out of the mansion...I bet you put him up to it, didn't you?"
John then is surprised that Victor would do this but then again he isn't really surprised as John then says "The old man finally did it...Vic did it, Brady maybe this is it, that this is the end of the road for you, it seems he has washed his hands of you but Brady you have no one to blame here except yourself...you did this to yourself!"
Brady then says "Yes I did but I had plenty of help from you now didn't I?" John then says "Brady I love you, kid, I always have always will but if you thought that your grandfather showed you tough love then I am afraid I have no choice but to do the same!" John then turns his back on Brady as he leaves the pier and when he does Brady is looking at the flask and when he does he looks like he is about to drink but he stops himself as he was struck by what John said to him just now
Chapter 2 (Scene 2- Horton Square- Salem)
J.J. is with Rory as the 2 of them are talking when J.J. sees Paige again as J.J. can't help but smile at Paige as Paige returns his smile as Rory then says "Hey man, where do you think you're going?" J.J. then says "Dude I have to see her...I have to go talk to her!" Rory tries to stop J.J. as he says "Dude honestly what do you think going over there talking to Paige is going to accomplish especially now that she knows all about your past!" J.J. then says "Well Rory I have to go over there and explain things now don't I?" Rory then says "Yeah do that and see what happens...you'll be lucky if she doesn't laugh in your face or worse decides to sic the cops on you!"
Just when J.J. is about to go over to talk to Paige, Paige leaves with her friends and when she does she smiles back at J.J. as J.J. smiles back at her as she leaves. Rory then notices as he says "Dude you have got it bad for Paige Larson don't you?" J.J. then says "Rory man shut up...and even if I did, what will it matter? Especially now that she knows who I really am or what I'm all about!"
Chapter 2 (Scene 3- DiMera Mansion- Salem)
Chad has just returned to Salem and when he does he comes into the living room surprising Stefano as he says "Father!" Stefano turns around to see his youngest son Chad as he says "Bentornato Chad...my God...it's been a long time!" Chad then says "Yes it has but I guess as for why I'm back in Salem let's just say that the more I tried to distance myself from this family the more I began to realize just how much of a mistake that it was!" Stefano then said "Well I'm glad that you have come to your senses all right, so just how long do you plan on staying in Salem?" Chad then says "Well my stay is permanent...what can I say...Salem has become home and I would have thought leaving would have been better but it made me realize just how much I really missed being here!"
Stefano then immediately flashes back to telling the doctor to lie to EJ and Abby about their baby when he then starts to realize that Chad doesn't know about his brother EJ and his ex Abby. Stefano then snaps out of it as he says "Well if you're going to stay...then you are staying here at the mansion no ifs ands or buts!" Chad then says "If I didn't know any better Father I would say you would want me around for a certain reason...why? Just what is it Father? If you are planning on pitting me against EJ by making me your right hand then it's not going to happen!" Stefano then says "As much as I would want you to take your rightful place in the family at my side I realized that that's a dream but a lot has happened since you have been away!"
Chad then says "So I assumed...so where's EJ?" Stefano then said "Wouldn't you love to know?"
Chapter 2 (Scene 4- TBD- Salem)
Abby is there at the bar with her cousins Will and Sonny as she is talking to them about their wedding when Abby starts to feel sick all of a sudden as Sonny says "Abby are you okay?" Will starts to also get worried as she says "Abby you are clearly not fine...something is up with you!" Abby then tries to get her cousins to back off as she says "Guys what are you talking about I'll be fine!" Will says "Abby you aren't fine...me and Sonny are taking you to the hospital!" Abby then says "I don't need a hospital I'll be fine...this will pass whatever it is!" Sonny then says "Will and I are taking you and that is that...no buts!"
Abby of course is wondering just what could be wrong with her as she thought that she got the relief of her life when she was told that she wasn't pregnant so she is wondering if this could be something else
Chapter 2 (Scene 5- Outside of the Horton Square- Salem)
EJ is outside of the Square when he is thinking about Abby but also thinking about his upcoming wedding to Sami when there is an unknown shadow watching E.J. as E.J. starts to feel that he is being watched as he hears that there is movement where he is as he says "Whoever you are...show yourself!"
A mysterious figure comes out of the shadows as she says "Little brother...it's been a long time!" E.J. then says "You!"
The shadow is revealed to be Kristen as she is back in Salem
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Post by terry on Mar 30, 2014 11:08:58 GMT -5
Chapter 3 (Scene 1- Paris, France- French Clinic)
Jack is questioning his doctor as she continues to lie to Jack about not knowing anything about how he ended up in her clinic as Jack then says "I'm so sorry doc, I was wondering just what your name is because I'm going to have to call you something now aren't I?" The doctor she then says "My name is Dr. Lambert and that is all you need to know Mr. Deveraux...now is there anything else I can do for you?"
Jack then asks Dr. Lambert "Just when am I going to be able to go home? I need to get back home to Salem get back to my wife Jennifer...my kids...my daughter Abby...my son J.J. because I am sure they are probably wondering just where I am!"
Dr. Lambert then of course doesn't answer Jack's questions as she tries to steer him away from his line of questioning by saying "Mr. Deveraux I will be right back...I have to go check your charts but you are in no position to go anywhere considering you just got out of a coma and you really need to regain your strength!"
Dr. Lambert leaves Jack's room and when she does she gets on her cellphone as she makes a rather mysterious call to a mysterious man on the phone as she says "It appears our patient is not only awake from his coma but he actually thinks that he is going to be able to go home...so what do you want me to do with him now?"
The mystery man on the other end of the phone says "Nothing for now but keep him under lock and key...it appears I have plans for Mr. Deveraux but I have plans for the other mystery patients too at your clinic as well as all of Salem...they will have no idea what hit them!"
Chapter 3 (Scene 2- Kiriakis Mansion)
Maggie is there with Victor as she says "Are you proud of yourself Victor? You have seemingly lost your grandson Brady forever but did you really have to take it that far?" Victor then says "Maggie...Brady gave me no choice...none at all...he seemingly was not only destroying himself but look at Titan just look at our profits ever since Brady has decided to douse himself with alcohol and drugs now if you want to go sympathize Maggie then by all means do so but Brady needs to learn that with losing everything he has to pick himself back up on his own with tough love!" Victor then says "Yes it may have been taking it a little bit too far but I am done seeing Brady trash his life because if he wants to go do that then he's not going to do it here where we can all have a front row seat!"
There is a ring of the doorbell as Victor then says "Henderson will you get the door please?" Henderson then goes to answer the door and when he does answer it he opens the door as he is shocked to see who is at the door
It's....Philip...Philip is back in Salem as he says "Hey Henderson...are you going to leave me hanging or are you actually going to invite me inside?" Henderson then says "Of course Philip...come on in!" Henderson lets Philip in and as soon as he does Philip then says to Henderson "If you want to do the honors of introducing me then by all means but I think I would rather surprise my father and Maggie myself if that's okay?" Henderson then says "All right!"
Henderson then comes back into the living room with Victor and Maggie as Victor then asks Henderson just who it was that was at the door as he says "Well Henderson...well!"
Philip comes into the living room surprising Maggie and his father Victor as he says "Boy does it feel good to be home...Dad...Maggie I'm back!"
Victor and Maggie are completely shocked but surprised as Maggie then says to her step-son Philip "Philip you get over here and give me a hug this very minute!" Philip then hugs Maggie as he says to her "I wanted to surprise both you and Dad!" Victor then says "I'm surprised...why didn't you tell me that you were coming in from Chicago? I would have had you picked up at the airport if I knew you were coming!"
Chapter 3 (Scene 3- Brady Pub- Salem)
Sami then says to Eric "Tell me there is no way you are seriously marrying Nicole?" Nicole then flashes the ring in Sami's face taunting her as she says "Read 'em and weep Sami...your brother over here proposed to me and I said yes!" Eric then said "Yes Sami I'm marrying Nicole and so far you and Grandma are the only ones that know about this but I am hoping that you will at least suck it up enough to wish us well considering you're marrying EJ and I sucked it up enough to wish you guys well!"
Sami then said "Don't get me wrong I'm happy that you're getting married Eric but I feel like you could do so much better than Nicole Walker...I mean seriously her track record alone speaks for itself...Lucas...Victor...EJ and let's not forget what she did to me with that whole Sydney thing!" Eric then said "Well Nicole is not that woman anymore and besides Sami she has changed yes she may have done bad things but EJ is no saint either and neither are you for that matter!"
Chapter 3 (Scene 4- Bo & Hope's House- Salem)
Hope is sitting in her living room thinking about Bo or even when she or their daughter Ciara will see him again considering he's on assignment when the phone rings and when Hope goes to answer it she says "Hello is anyone there?" A man's voice answers as he says "Hello Fancy Face...listen I can't talk right now but I just wanted to let you know that I'm going to be okay but that I took quite the risk even calling you right now since I am so deep cover that if they realize that I'm a plant...I'm as good as dead!"
Hope then says "Brady...I'm just so glad that you finally called I was beginning to even think that you never would but I know the risk you're taking but damn it Brady I miss you and even more so our children miss you especially Ciara!" Bo then says "I know Fancy Face...I know and I miss you too all of you but I promise that when I come back I'll make it up to both of you!"
Bo then says "Listen Fancy Face I gotta go but before I do I wanted to let you know just how much I love you, Shawn-D, Ciara, Claire, all of you and as soon as this mission is over I'll be on my way back to you!"
Hope then says "You better Brady...I love you too!" Bo ends the call and as soon as he does, Hope decides to get in touch with Bo's superiors at the ISA to let them know that she wants in on Bo's assignment
Chapter 3 (Scene 5- Outside Horton Square- Salem)
EJ says to Kristen "You have some nerve showing your face back here in Salem especially after what you've done!" Kristen then says to EJ "Well I didn't necessarily have a choice now did I especially with Nicole and Eric getting so close to breaking this thing with me and Chyka wide open!" EJ then says "Well not just that but you have a lot of people gunning for you Kristen not to mention that sap Brady Black has been destroying himself ever since you left!"
Kristen then says "Well Brady you say he's been destroyed...how do you think I felt when he seemingly turned his back on me!" Kristen then says "So little brother I wonder if you plan on turning me in!"
EJ is faced with a dilemma as he says "No...I won't turn you in but you better stay out of sight and fast!" Kristen then says "I always do!"
Neither EJ or Kristen realize that they are being watched as someone knows that Kristen is back as the person watching them from afar is none other than Nick Fallon
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Post by gapeach on Mar 30, 2014 11:45:03 GMT -5
I love how you are incorporating all the characters in your story. Can't wait to see who is behind Jack's predicament.
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Post by terry on Mar 31, 2014 21:37:25 GMT -5
Thanks for commenting
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