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Post by MrsM on May 24, 2012 6:56:11 GMT -5
Get you some girl!!! Nothing like a little something with a stranger. Not that I have ever done that, but still....
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Post by djm on May 24, 2012 7:11:09 GMT -5
Ohhh Mel I really don't like that she is moving so fast with AJ. I agree with SG what a place to end. I hope they have protection.
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Post by mae00 on May 24, 2012 8:37:22 GMT -5
WHAT?!?! You end it there??? You are such a tease jkjpatch!! But it's my own fault. I should have expected that from you Great chapter. I hope this guy doesn't end up hurting her.
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Post by DancingDays on May 24, 2012 9:07:45 GMT -5
I like the ending/pause. Leaves me with sexy thoughts all day. *walks over to TristanLand* But, dang, that girl moves fast!!! Slow down Mel!!!
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Post by fluffysmom on May 24, 2012 9:45:26 GMT -5
Go Melanie!! Very hot chapter Kpatch. Loved it!!
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Post by Kpatch on May 25, 2012 4:43:48 GMT -5
THE CHART HOUSE
The next morning, Melanie was conked out on the hotel bed. She felt her hair being stroked but didn’t have the strength to open her eyes. She mumbled something.
“What was that?” A.J. laughed at her attempt at speech.
“I said good morning. But it’s too early.”
“Maybe for you. But I have meetings this morning.
“Social worker meetings?” Melanie’s eyes were still closed as she carried on this conversation.
“Actually I’m a lawyer. Well, I will be as soon as I pass the Illinois Bar. I’m shadowing a social worker as part of an unpaid internship.”
Melanie’s eyes opened and she giggled. “Aha! The truth comes out.”
“I hate to … um … rush you, but I really do have a meeting. How about we order breakfast, and then get going?”
Melanie’s brows furrowed as she interpreted this as the brush off.
A.J. read the expression on her face. “I’d like to see you again, Melanie. Can I call you?”
The furrow turned into a grin and she kissed her bed partner. “I’d like that.”
“You know, I’d have to say … this was a surprise. Maybe the nicest surprise of my life.”
“Really? I mean … me too.”
A.J. kissed her and her mind was a haze. She didn’t even know this man, but there was something about him that felt so right, and nothing had felt right in a very long time.
“This seems a little backwards, but could I have your phone number?” He politely asked the question but felt pretty sure of the answer.
Melanie picked up the pad and pen on the nightstand and wrote her number down. She kissed him again. “I gotta go to the little girl’s room. I’ll be right back.”
She slipped her shirt on. As she headed for the bathroom, A.J. called to her. “What do you want for breakfast?”
Melanie closed the bathroom door. “I don’t care. Anything. Everything. I’m hungry.”
“Is there anything you absolutely hate?”
“Kippers. I hate kippers.”
“Duly noted,” said A.J. as he dialed Room Service. Melanie finished her business and emerged from the bathroom as A.J. placed the order.
“Hello. This is Alexander Kiriakis in Room 422. I’d like to order breakfast.”
Melanie’s jaw dropped as she heard A.J. tell Room Service his name.
To be continued Monday …
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Post by MrsM on May 25, 2012 6:55:34 GMT -5
I knew he had to be a Kiriakis!!! Can we have spoilers pretty please???
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Post by sportsgirl on May 25, 2012 7:03:40 GMT -5
He knows her name is Melanie, but does he have any clue it's THE Melanie that was married to Philip? I wonder!
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Post by DancingDays on May 25, 2012 8:31:18 GMT -5
Ahhh, Melanie and those Kiriakis boys. Kpatch - any idea on who you'd cast as A.J.? I'd love a visual.
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Post by djm on May 25, 2012 8:31:23 GMT -5
Love that he is a Kariakis. My first thought that he was one of Justin and Adrienne's sons was right. Boy what a shock for Mel I also wander if he knows that Mel is the Mel that was married to Philip. Can we please have previews for the weekend.
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Post by mae00 on May 25, 2012 8:38:17 GMT -5
No wonder Mel fell so fast for him!! Poor girl has it bad for those Kiriakis men - and they for her. Even when she's not out to snag one she does.
I'd love a visual too!
Will Phillip make an appearance & find out about Melanie & AJ? Wonder what his reaction would be.....
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Post by fluffysmom on May 25, 2012 9:24:17 GMT -5
I'm guessing he'll be just as surprised as she was. Great twist Kpatch!
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Post by Kpatch on May 25, 2012 10:14:08 GMT -5
I picture A.J. looking like a young Justin. If I come across an appropriate visual, I will post it. I'll also post previews for next week.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much! Thanks for your interest!
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Post by Minako98 on May 25, 2012 10:48:50 GMT -5
*deleted*
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Post by Kpatch on May 25, 2012 16:08:33 GMT -5
For your consideration ... A.J. Kiriakis
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