Chasing the Moon (Read 23,076 times)

[Trey]

YAY!!!! Parker's thoughts, the happy ending, and the way they get together with the history and finally discussing their issues...awesomeness!

[krw627]

Parker's thoughts were my favorite part. Oh, and Chloe actually working. It's nice to see that she was able to use her talent to help her make some money....hopefully restoring some of her self-esteem.

Also, the real conversations between the characters were great...they actually talked out a bad situation. :-)

[shi22]

This was the perfect ending to the perfect story! I really enjoyed reading this. I was actually really hoping Chloe would do something in the end to make up for her driving Philip (and me) crazy in the previous chapters. I loved seeing HER go to Philip in the end and giving him the frame with the poem he wrote in high school. Usually it's Philip who does these sweet things for her so it was really nice to see Chloe do it for a change. I loved hearing(reading) her list out all of the reasons she loves Philip. I think my favorite reason was when she said "I love the way you love me." That's one of the reasons I love Philip too. He's just so perfect when he's really in love.

Thank you so much for writing this story, Kpatch! I'm just sad that it's over.

[wendylou]

I guess I would say that what I loved so much is that kpatch wrote the characters of Chloe and Phillip so true to the ones we originally grew to love. Even though Chloe had still been a prostitute in this story, and was recovering from that and her depression she was still the smart, talented, sweet Chloe we loved. Not the one who jumps into the sack (or elevator) at the drop of a hat. And Phillip was strong, reliable, romantic, a great father and a great friend to Chloe and so in love with her. This is the Phillip and Chloe I want back on the show.
I also loved all the memories (and the visual aids) and Parker's thoughts.

[Kpatch]

Wow, I absolutely love reading your feedback about the story. Thank you all so much. I am beyond thrilled that many of you were so enthralled with this tale and thought it was true to character and history. That is always my goal.

This was the longest story I’ve ever written. There was so much ground I wanted to cover and issues I wanted to resolve, so thank you all for sticking with it. I’m so happy that you got a kick out of getting to know Parker. I was hoping that you would find him entertaining. He’s much smarter than his parents, isn’t he?

Jan 13, 2012 18:48:29 GMT -5 shi22 said:

I loved hearing(reading) her list out all of the reasons she loves Philip. I think my favorite reason was when she said "I love the way you love me." That's one of the reasons I love Philip too.

I'm glad you liked Chloe's list because I was actually annoyed by it. Those were all the reasons that I love Philip. She took the words right out of my mouth.

Jan 13, 2012 18:48:29 GMT -5 shi22 said:

Thank you so much for writing this story, Kpatch! I'm just sad that it's over.

Well, it’s not quite over. Ready for one more sequel? Ready or not, here it comes. Starting on Monday, I’ll be posting the first chapter of the last part of this three-part story. I didn’t know when I wrote After the Fall that there would be two sequels, but this couple just gets under my skin and I can’t let them go. The next part is much shorter than Chasing the Moon.
myhourglass.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=newkpatchfic&action=display&thread=2710&page=1

After it’s done, I’ve got a story about Melanie, and I’m currently working on a J&J story. And I haven’t forgotten about the sequels to Passions. They are ready for takeoff as soon as they’re cleared by the tower.

[MrsM]

Can't wait!!!

[André DiMera]

jkjpatch, I can't even tell you how much I love your stories! They are, truly, amazing! Your stories have actually gotten me to root for a Chloe/Philip pairing. I love your version of Chloe and Philip! I can't wait for all of these stories! I'm assuming by J&J you mean Jack & Jenn, and I'm especially looking forward to that one! But, as I said, all of your stories are amazing, and I look forward to each and every one of them! Great job with this story, it's one of my favorites! Keep up the awesome work!

[fluffysmom]

I love the way Kpatch incorporates Phloe's history into her stories. They've always had so much passion but Kpatch gives us an adult love story between them that we never got on the show. I loved Parker's insight and witty thoughts. I really liked Philip never judging Chloe for her past mistakes and being a true friend to her as she was trying to heal. I am looking forward to reading more about this beautiful family!

[wendylou]

Well, it’s not quite over. Ready for one more sequel?

Yes! And honey, if you want to write 20 more sequels, right up to when Phillip and Chloe are reminiscing in their rocking chairs about the good ol' days, I'll be reading it.

Can't wait to read the next one.

[fluffysmom]

Still LOVE this story! It is definitely worth rereading. Thanks for writing this amazing love story Kpatch. It's one of my favorites.

[ghoulgirl]

I loved it so much. Loved all Parker's comments. But most of all I loved all of the blasts from the past. Live their history so much.

Thanks kpatch for another knock out story!

[jayssweetgirl]

Dec 21, 2011 16:15:02 GMT -5 fluffysmom said:

I'm sure Philip wasn't expecting to have to explain about Parker and his living arrangements with Chloe so soon. That's definitely awkward conversation for a first date.

Rachel is pretty obvious about her intentions. I can't blame her for that.

I could never ever be sooo direct period, let alone on a first date.......

[billiereed]

Just started reading this. I am loving it already! You have a gift.

[billiereed]

It's after 2 a.m. and I can't stop reading this lol Parker's thoughts are making me LOL so much. Great story! Just a great story.

[Kpatch]

@billiereed - I love your enthusiasm! Thank you for reading.