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Post by DancingDays on Nov 4, 2011 8:21:00 GMT -5
Beautiful sentiment! And wonderfully done!  Oh, and nice touch with the Cubs game!  |
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Post by mae00 on Nov 4, 2011 8:33:16 GMT -5
Loved the Marine & Semper Fi reference!!!
It's not a secret that I'm not a fan of Chloe's but you sure can make a storyline for her that's tolerable!! Glad that she had to face facts & realize that she beared just as much blame as anyone else for her choices and situation.
Great job jkjpatch!!!
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Post by djm on Nov 4, 2011 9:04:01 GMT -5
That was the best ending ever. Thanks for the wonderful story. I cried more then once reading this one. Sure got spoiled with chapters everyday. Tbankd again Kpatch.
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Post by jaysdelina on Nov 4, 2011 9:15:51 GMT -5
Lovely ending jkjpatch.I love that you included the dogtags and gave them an even deeper meaning than they already held.Wonderfully done.
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Post by krw627 on Nov 4, 2011 9:55:50 GMT -5
Standing Ovation!!!! Loved this story!
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Post by gapeach on Nov 4, 2011 10:47:13 GMT -5
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Post by Trey on Nov 4, 2011 11:26:23 GMT -5
Aww, wonderful finale... bravo!
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Post by Minako98 on Nov 4, 2011 13:11:24 GMT -5
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Post by fluffysmom on Nov 4, 2011 20:03:07 GMT -5
Perfect ending Kpatch! Thank you for writing this terrific story. I really enjoyed it. It was great seeing the return of the dog tags. I loved them being used for their symbol of trust.
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Post by fluffysmom on Nov 4, 2011 20:05:22 GMT -5
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Post by Kpatch on Nov 4, 2011 20:40:08 GMT -5
Wow, thank you all so much for the fantastic reception to the story, and especially to the ending. I love reading everyone's comments. I’m so glad you liked it! Aren’t you all proud of me for writing an entire Phloe story with no romance? Or were you hoping there would be some? I didn’t think a romance would be realistic until the air was completely cleared and they dealt with everything that had happened this year. That was my purpose for writing this story. But now that they've said all that needed to be said, the door is wide open for another kind of relationship. Loved the story and the ending. Let's guess... new story called "New Beginnings"  & Fluffy: Really? You want me to write more of this story? Hmmm, have to think about it. Oh okay. You talked me into it.  Check out the sequel here: myhourglass.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=newkpatchfic&action=display&thread=2399&page=1Oh, and nice touch with the Cubs game! @dd - Glad you caught the Cubs reference. Yup, that one was for you. Taking a page from my friend Andre Dimera’s playbook, I’m going to be posting a readers choice poll shortly and you get to choose which kpatch story comes next. |
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Post by jaysdelina on Nov 4, 2011 21:10:01 GMT -5
Oh awesome!While I loved that there was no romance in this story....wait a minute...did I just say that?....anyway,I'm surprised you didn't have him kiss her forhead.It was a move he's made onscreen before,but I have to admit,if that didn't happen,I absolutely LOVED that he gave her one of his dogtags and kept the other as a symbol between them.I hated that we never saw the dogtags again onscreen.
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Post by fluffysmom on Nov 4, 2011 21:36:26 GMT -5
Yay Kpatch! I love your sequels! All Kpatch fics are fantastic!
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Post by DancingDays on Nov 5, 2011 11:38:34 GMT -5
Oh, and nice touch with the Cubs game! @dd - Glad you caught the Cubs reference. Yup, that one was for you. I thought it might have been. |
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Post by phloefansince2000 on Nov 15, 2011 20:50:00 GMT -5
love your story girl can't wait to read more!
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