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Post by djm on Sept 20, 2011 4:42:55 GMT -5
That is the Melanie that I first met and fell in love with. Thanks for bringing her back Kpatch. Just loved the interaction of her and Philip. Looking forward to tomorrows chapter.
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Post by jaysdelina on Sept 20, 2011 6:49:42 GMT -5
Thanks for bringing my girl Mel back,this should be interesting
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Post by MrsM on Sept 20, 2011 6:55:34 GMT -5
The whirlwind otherwise known as Melanie! Poor Philip. He isn't gonna know whether he is coming or going with all these women!!
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Post by fluffysmom on Sept 20, 2011 12:59:40 GMT -5
Great chapter Kpatch. Philip better watch out. All of these ladies are gonna be too much to handle.
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Post by Trey on Sept 20, 2011 13:03:19 GMT -5
Melanie just got a lot more interesting...
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Post by sportsgirl on Sept 20, 2011 14:17:12 GMT -5
Just about everything Melanie said to him can be taken as sexual... such a flirt! Stephanie will not be happy.
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Post by ghoulgirl on Sept 20, 2011 14:37:15 GMT -5
I like this Melanie. Wonder what she has in store for him! Thanks for posting jkjpatch! Loving the story so far!
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Post by Kpatch on Sept 20, 2011 14:40:48 GMT -5
Heads up! To reward you for your readership and great comments, tomorrow will be Bonus Wednesday. There will be two chapters posted, one of which will be hot.
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Post by sportsgirl on Sept 20, 2011 14:45:44 GMT -5
Hopefully I will get to read them later in the day, if not then I might get the 3 to read on Thursday...
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Post by ghoulgirl on Sept 20, 2011 14:50:25 GMT -5
Whoo hoo! Totally looking forward to this. Thanks for spoiling us jkjpatch! Muah!
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Post by MrsM on Sept 20, 2011 15:47:15 GMT -5
Yay!!!! Love it!! Can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You spoil us!!!
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Post by DancingDays on Sept 20, 2011 16:37:43 GMT -5
Woo-hooo!!!!! Dirty stuff is coming!!!!! ;D ;D ;D
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Post by bradydiva06 on Sept 20, 2011 16:54:11 GMT -5
Great chapter. I hope the hot chapter is a phinie chapter.
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Post by fluffysmom on Sept 20, 2011 21:54:43 GMT -5
Yay Kpatch! You are awesome! I'm looking forward to the hot chapter. Woo Hoo!!
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Post by Kpatch on Sept 21, 2011 4:09:07 GMT -5
CONFERENCE ROOM AT TITAN AFTER HOURS, A WEEK LATER
Philip is sitting in a chair and only half paying attention to Melanie, who’s writing on a flip chart using markers of many colors. His elbow is resting on the conference table and his hand is supporting his head. He's trying to keep himself from nodding off. Philip: It’s late. Let’s call it a night. Melanie: Okay, but if you don’t care about your own company... Philip: I care. I care. But I’m tired. And we’re never going to agree on a name. If you ask me, there’s nothing wrong with Book Keepers. Melanie: That’s because you don’t have a creative bone in your body. With a name like Book Keepers, the only people who’ll visit the website are accountants. Philip: Fine, then let’s call the bookstore Titan. Melanie: Titan makes people think of the Titanic and we know what happened to that ship. Philip: You are the most contrary person I’ve ever met. Is this how you talked to the executives at Amazon? Melanie: Sometimes, yes. If they were as bull-headed as you’re being. Philip: I’m done here. I’m going home. He gets up out of his chair. Melanie: That’s your answer to everything. Philip: What are you talking about? Melanie: If you don’t like what someone has to say, you leave. Philip: That’s not true. Melanie: Yes it is. You get the last word in, and you leave. Not much of a fighter, huh? Philip lets out a scoffing laugh. Philip: You don’t know what the hell you’re talking about. Not much of a fighter? I have war wounds to prove how much of a fighter I am. Want to see my prosthetic leg? Melanie: Ya, right. Philip rolls up his pant legs as Melanie’s eyes go wide. Her shock immediately turns to anger when she sees that Philip has two good legs. Melanie: You bastard. Philip: I had you going there for a minute, didn’t I? Melanie: You’re warped. Philip: I know. Good night, Melanie. I’ll see you tomorrow. Melanie: Philip, wait. She moves closer to him and gets within kissing distance of Philip. Melanie: You know, Philip, I think we could make a really good team if you ... Philip: If I what? Melanie: If you let yourself go a little. She reaches up and pulls his head toward her and kisses him. He responds at first, then pulls away. Philip: Isn’t this what got you fired from Amazon? Melanie: Yes, but Jeff Gizmos isn’t nearly as cute as you are. It’d be worth the risk. Philip: I’m not so sure. Melanie: Well ... why don’t we find out? Philip smiles and kisses Melanie.
To be continued. Tune in later today for a bonus chapter ...
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