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Post by fluffysmom on Aug 15, 2011 23:29:48 GMT -5
Great chapter Kpatch! I wonder how many people will end up at the pier gun in hand! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Post by ghoulgirl on Aug 15, 2011 23:33:11 GMT -5
It would be oh so totally awesome if they all shot her cause none of them could stand her!! LMAO
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Post by djm on Aug 16, 2011 4:48:49 GMT -5
LOL. I nearly choked on my cereal again. Working days so went to bed early last night. I loved the band aid brought in on a siliver platter. Seems like everyone has a gun. Boy it would be fun if they all shot Taylor and confessed but no one can be charged as they don't know which bullet was the one that killed her. Thanks for the chapter Kpatch.
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Post by gapeach on Aug 16, 2011 15:00:26 GMT -5
I agree with everyone... loving this story.
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Post by Kpatch on Aug 16, 2011 18:24:46 GMT -5
THE PIER, 10 MINUTES LATER
Sami is walking along the pier while talking on her cell phone.
Sami: Yes, Daddy, we’re fine. Where am I? I’m at the pier. Why? No, it’s not dangerous . I swear. I finished all my target practice classes. Sami surreptitiously checks her gun and then puts it back in her pocket. I can take care of myself.
In the shadows behind boxes, Dimitri is surreptitiously checking his gun. Meanwhile, up the stairs in the shadows, Marco is surreptiously checking his gun. In another shadow lurks Brady. Another shadow holds EJ, while Stefano is standing in the shadows as is Victor, Nicole, Henderson, Sami, Bo, Roman, Caroline, and a groundhog from Puxatawny.
Taylor arrives holding a latte in a paper cup, wondering why the pier is so deserted.
Taylor: Hello? Anybody there?
Everyone steps out of the shadows and fires their gun at Taylor. She falls to the ground, deader than dead. EJ comes running out of his shadow and drops to his knees next to Taylor. He cradles her head and cries.
EJ: Oh the humanity. Tis a far far better thing. I coulda been a contender. Look what they did to my boy.
Nicole: Bullets didn’t kill Taylor. She was killed by hate. Well now I have hate too. But I would like to have that cameo.
Nicole rips the cameo off of Taylor’s neck.
To be continued . Tune in tomorrow for the finale.
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Post by fluffysmom on Aug 16, 2011 18:30:03 GMT -5
I love it Kpatch! So many bullets and one tiny woman. I can't wait to read the finale tomorrow. Terrific story!
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Post by MrsM on Aug 16, 2011 18:50:26 GMT -5
Did I count right? 13 (including the ground hog)?? Is that the lucky number in this case?
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Post by ghoulgirl on Aug 16, 2011 18:55:16 GMT -5
ROTFL! I Love it! Great story jkjpatch! Thanks so much for taking all our wishes and writing us a story about it! It was great!
Looking forward to tomorrow's conclusion.
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Post by Tom Horton on Aug 16, 2011 19:50:21 GMT -5
I say the groundhog did it!  Great Chapter!! |
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Post by sportsgirl on Aug 16, 2011 21:09:43 GMT -5
I love all the classic lines from other movies!! & how did Phil get there all the way from Pennsylvania? ;D
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Post by mae00 on Aug 16, 2011 21:51:14 GMT -5
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Post by Trey on Aug 16, 2011 23:39:53 GMT -5
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Post by djm on Aug 17, 2011 4:44:35 GMT -5
Thanks Kpatch. Love that all the people shot at her. Even a groundhog got into the action. So like Nicole to take the cameo. Looking forward to the last chapter tonight. Promise not to go to bed early.
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Post by DancingDays on Aug 17, 2011 8:44:23 GMT -5
Excellent! This story makes me happy each time I read it. Thanks kpatch!
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Post by Kpatch on Aug 17, 2011 18:35:35 GMT -5
KIRIAKIS MANSION, THE NEXT MORNING
Nicole is lying in bed trying to shut out the events of last night. She hears crying coming from another room and she puts her pillow over her head, trying to block out the sounds and her own thoughts. Suddenly she realizes she is being restrained and she pulls the pillow off her head. She turns over and sees Brady lying next to her and feels his strong arms around her.
Brady: Good morning beautiful. Were you having a bad dream?
Nicole’s eyes open wide and she sits up in bed, then looks around the room trying to get her bearings. She falls back onto the mattress.
Nicole: Oh my god Brady. You wouldn’t believe the dream I had.
Brady: Try me.
Nicole: I dreamed that … don’t be mad, but I dreamed I married EJ so I could be close to Sydney. Then my sister Taylor came to visit and she and EJ fell in love and had an affair. Then there was this part about two Rafes in the Dimera basement.
Brady: Huh?
Nicole: I know, it didn’t make any sense in my dream either. But there was also a war between the Kiriakis and Dimera families and Taylor ended up getting caught in the crossfire … which served her right because she was starting to flirt with you too.
Brady: She got killed?
Nicole: Yeah.
Brady: Sounds like your sibling rivalry is being played out by your subconscious.
Nicole [sarcastically]: Thanks a lot for the instant dream analysis. Who do you think you are? Marlena?
Brady: Well, I suppose a little of her pop psychology rubbed off on me while I was living with her and my dad. What I don’t get is why you had to marry EJ in order to get close to Sydney.
Nicole: In my dream, Sydney was … EJ’s daughter.
Brady: Well, thankfully she’s not. She’s our daughter.
Nicole: Did I hear her crying this morning?
Brady: Yes, but don’t worry. I already changed and fed her so you could sleep some more. She’s in her room watching a video and talking a blue streak.
Nicole: You are the best husband and father ever.
She kisses Brady.
Brady: If I knew you were having such a bad dream, I would have woken you up. Oh, by the way, your mother called. She said it’s nothing urgent.
Nicole: I’ll call her back later. But, you know, Brady, as long as we’re still in bed, we may as well make the most of it. Don’t you think?
Brady smiles and kisses Nicole.
Brady: Good thinking, Mrs. Black.
The End
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