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Post by heroicmuse on Jul 31, 2015 20:52:10 GMT -5
I thought it might be fun to do Highs and Lows every week for the active fan fictions, so that we can all get some feedback on what we've written that week. Let me know if you want to participate or what your thoughts are.
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Post by Kpatch on Jul 31, 2015 20:56:58 GMT -5
Brilliant idea heroicmuse!!! Breaking Ties Highs - I loved Paige and Maxine in Breaking Ties. And Parker asking for Philip. Lows - Roman getting yelled at; Miles Second Time Around Highs - Pool hall date Low - Stephanie being sick and having to break a date Road Trip High - Ciara giving Claire good advice Low - Crazy Jan |
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Post by heroicmuse on Jul 31, 2015 21:01:37 GMT -5
Once Upon a Time Highs - Chloe standing up to Nancy; Philip's thoughts Lows - Nancy's plan; having to wait til next week to see the therapy session. Road Trip Highs - Ciara being supportive of Claire. Those nicknames are so cute they have for each other. Low - Jan disrupting the trip. Second Time Around High - Pool Hall Date Low - Nothing really but I agree with Kpatch. Boo to getting sick! |
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Post by André DiMera on Jul 31, 2015 21:25:09 GMT -5
Once Upon a Time Highs - Chloe standing up to Nancy; Craig making an appearance Lows - Nancy Second Time Around Highs - Pool Hall, Stephanie and Ivy Lows - Stephanie getting sick Breaking Ties Highs - Nicole standing up to Miles; Paige and Maxine Lows - Roman getting yelled at; Miles' general attitude Great idea, heroicmuse! |
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Post by sevenna92 on Jul 31, 2015 22:21:52 GMT -5
Oh my God! Sounds fun! I'd love for people to critique my fanfic "Stolen Lives" and see what they like or don't like. It'd be nice to get some constructive criticism.
I'm working on a scene right now and I should be uploading it sometime tonight.
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Post by heroicmuse on Jul 31, 2015 22:26:42 GMT -5
Yay I've been reading it. Glad you will be posting more sevenna92 |
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Post by sevenna92 on Jul 31, 2015 22:40:51 GMT -5
heroicmuse I'm going to do my best to upload as quickly and frequently as possible because the show as of late has been depressing me so badly. Glad to hear that you've been reading! I was getting kind of worried people were losing interest because I hardly get any comments nowadays. You're more than welcome to comment on the highs and lows of my scenes for the week - whatever that means. Does the lows part mean that it's a necessarily bad thing?
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Post by heroicmuse on Jul 31, 2015 23:00:51 GMT -5
Does the lows part mean that it's a necessarily bad thing? No, it could also just be something we didn't like that the characters did, like in mine people didn't like Roman getting yelled at. |
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Post by sevenna92 on Jul 31, 2015 23:01:47 GMT -5
Oh, that makes sense!
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Post by fluffysmom on Jul 31, 2015 23:37:39 GMT -5
Great idea heroicmuse. Once Upon a Time High - Philip thinking about all of the good times with Chloe. Low - Chloe coming home to the trouble between Parker and Nancy. Breaking Ties High - Parker asking for Philip / Sally and JJ Low - Miles Scenes from a road trip High - Ciara trying to cheer up Claire Low - Jan upsetting Claire as they were starting the road trip Second Time Around - High - the date at the pool hall/ Stephanie and Ivy Low - Stephanie getting sick |
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Post by Kpatch on Aug 7, 2015 19:00:47 GMT -5
Week of August 3rdheroicmuse's Breaking Bad Ties High - Daniel and Philip’s chat and their subtle digs at each other. Low - Roman, Miles and Rafe getting raked over the coals for doing their jobs. André DiMera's Road Trip The fudge shop! Low - Nothing unavitasegreta's 2TA (Second Time Around  ) Highs - The date at the restaurant in the Hancock Building; Kayla’s calm reaction to Stephanie’s meltdown; all the banter; Stephanie's relationship with Ivy Low - Ava's tantrum
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Post by heroicmuse on Aug 7, 2015 21:40:16 GMT -5
Week of August 3rd Kpatch's Once Upon a Time High: Philip showing up in Chloe's office Low: Having to wait so long for Dr. Richards! LOL unavitasegreta's Second Time Around Kayla's conversation with Stephanie. The restaurant date Low: Ava's tantrum André DiMera's Road Trip High: I second Kpatch. The fudge shop wsa super awesome! Pie for breakfast is a close second. Low: Hearing that Shawn is crazy cause I like Shawn lol |
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Post by unavitasegreta on Aug 7, 2015 22:58:17 GMT -5
Kpatch's OUAT High: Chloe's eagerness to go to therapy and work out her issues. Low: I want more Mary, darn it! heroicmuse's Breaking Bad Ties. (It is indeed butt-kicking awesome like Breaking Bad!) High: All things Bev! Low: That Bev might be her own worst enemy and Jeff's parents come in a close second. André DiMera's Road Trip I'm on like chapter 3 so I am way behind. This fudge shop mention is now making me intrigued!
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Post by Kpatch on Aug 7, 2015 23:09:44 GMT -5
Oh dang. I forgot about the lows. I may need to edit my "picks."
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Post by Kpatch on Aug 7, 2015 23:12:18 GMT -5
I edited my post above to add the lows. And I added one more high for 2TA.
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