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Post by Tom Horton on Nov 11, 2011 12:04:37 GMT -5
I was chuckling over "some of them in elevators" until I read further and broke into full laughter at the "I'm just reading my script"! Excellent Chapter, Kpatch!
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Post by fluffysmom on Nov 11, 2011 12:24:05 GMT -5
I loved the elevator line too. That was too funny.
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Post by Kpatch on Nov 12, 2011 12:52:54 GMT -5
Author’s Note: I wrote Rear Window before I wrote After the Fall (or had any intention of writing it), so I apologize if any of this story seems redundant.
Monday
Quinn confronts Chloe.
Tuesday
Chloe questions Lucas’s motives where Sami’s concerned.
Wednesday
Lucas sends Chloe on a dangerous mission.
Thursday
Chloe gets caught!
Friday
Lucas uncovers surprising information.
Thanks for the rum and Almond Joys!
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Post by fluffysmom on Nov 12, 2011 14:44:24 GMT -5
Thanks for the previews Kpatch. It sounds like an interesting week.
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Post by sportsgirl on Nov 12, 2011 15:54:15 GMT -5
I miss Lucas  But now I want him back for a great story line and not for Sami. |
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Post by MrsM on Nov 12, 2011 21:11:12 GMT -5
Very welcome kpatch!!!  |
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Post by djm on Nov 13, 2011 12:46:24 GMT -5
Thanks for the previews. You are welcome for the Almond Joys.
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Post by Kpatch on Nov 14, 2011 6:50:38 GMT -5
SALEM INN
Lucas: There’s something weird going on across the street.
Chloe: Like what?
Lucas: I don’t know. But it’s superweird.
Chloe gets a text from Quinn and she rolls her eyes.
Chloe: He wants to know how it’s going.
Lucas: Tell him you’ve got a very satisfied customer. Hell, I told him I want a standing appointment with you and I’ll pay for your services all day every day. What more does that asshole want?
Chloe: He’s pretty possessive. If you look up pimp in the dictionary, there’s a picture of Quinn.
Lucas laughs.
Lucas: I need you to run another errand for me.
Chloe: Number 3 again?
Lucas: No, I need you to go to Electronics Country and get me a bug.
Chloe: Ew.
Lucas: Not that kind of bug. Geez, didn’t you used to be brainy?
Chloe: That was before my bra size exceeded my IQ score.
Lucas: A listening device. I need to hear what’s going on across the street. Get me two of them. I need two 2-way listening devices.
Chloe leaves and returns two hours later with the merchandise Lucas asked for. She is about to enter Lucas’s room when Quinn stops her.
Quinn: What have you got in the bag, love?
Chloe: Oh, just some things that … um … the client wanted.
Quinn: What kinds of things?
Chloe: Um … just some things to enhance our time together.
Quinn: That’s great. Glad to hear it. It sounds like you're really getting into this assignment after all.
Chloe: Ya, sure.
Quinn: Are you treating the customer right?
Chloe: Of course I am, you twit. He wouldn’t pay to spend so much time with me otherwise.
Quinn: Do you like him?
Chloe: Why do you care?
Quinn: Research shows that it’s better for business if the hooker likes the john.
Chloe: There are studies on the subject?
Quinn: Tons of them. So, do you like him?
Chloe: He’s … He reminds me of one of my ex-husbands.
Quinn: Is that a good thing or a bad thing?
Chloe: A little of both. He wouldn’t be an ex-husband if it were all good.
Quinn: How many ex-husbands do you have anyway?
Chloe knits her brow.
Chloe: Could you hold this a second?
Chloe gives Quinn her shopping bag to hold as she counts off on her fingers.
Chloe: Brady, Lucas, Daniel. Three.
Quinn: That’s a lot of exes for someone as young as you. Which of your three ex-husbands is the father of your son?
Chloe: Neither of them.
Quinn: Oy. Kids today. Here’s your packages. Have a good day mate.
Chloe rolls her eyes and heads into the hotel room.
To be continued …
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Post by MrsM on Nov 14, 2011 7:51:17 GMT -5
Bwahahaha!!!! "That was before my bra size exceeded my IQ score" Hilarious!!!!!
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Post by DancingDays on Nov 14, 2011 9:33:58 GMT -5
Chloe: That was before my bra size exceeded my IQ score.
That line almost made me shoot coffee through my nose. LOL
Oh, and the lines about the hooker research. Too funny kpatch!!! ;D
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Post by mae00 on Nov 14, 2011 9:36:22 GMT -5
^^^I agree! I had to quickly remember that i was at work before falling in the floor and laughing so hard!
Good one jkjpatch!! Awesome chapter!
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Post by sportsgirl on Nov 14, 2011 10:06:58 GMT -5
Yep, that line was the best!!
I wonder if Quinn will actually find out it is her ex-hubby!
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Post by Tom Horton on Nov 14, 2011 12:58:28 GMT -5
Another great and funny chapter Kpatch! I love that Chloe needed a hand free to count her ex-husbands!
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Post by fluffysmom on Nov 14, 2011 17:54:46 GMT -5
That chapter was LOL funny. Thanks Kpatch.
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Post by gapeach on Nov 14, 2011 20:28:54 GMT -5
Another great and funny chapter Kpatch! I love that Chloe needed a hand free to count her ex-husbands! Yeah - especially since she only has THREE ex-husbands. Loving this story, of course it has Lucas so it HAS to be great!! |
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