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Post by BrightlyShines on Oct 12, 2012 23:56:27 GMT -5
I am posting this story in more then one place. I hope that's okay.  Mysterious Family Ties Clue #1: Her name is Lucinda but some call her Lizzie Lu or Lu. She is related to Rafe and Gabi and she thinks by blood. But she is actually related to 2 other people in Salem she has never met in her life. Will this Mysterious family tie come through? And for her real family will she be seen as an annoyance or a true Miracle? Clue #2: Her name is Valeria she is related by blood to Rafe and Gabi. If you thought that Gabi was cray-cray you need to meet Valeria. She is vengeful, and jealous to a fault. When she finds out Lucinda's not related by blood she will stop at nothing to make her pay for that. Clue #3 A big party for a very special event will not end well. |
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Post by BrightlyShines on Oct 12, 2012 23:57:17 GMT -5
Prologue:
The story of Lucinda Hernandez's origins have never been just black and white. There have been patches of grey... of the type that great secrets come forth. Lucinda was born to Rosaura Hernandez. Rosaura Hernandez was a cousin of Rafe and Gabi they didn't see much of eachother as Rosaura was secretive. Everyone in her family thought Rosaura had had a child out of wed-lock, but that wasn't the case. The truth was that biologically Lucinda wasn't Rosaura's at all, though, Rosaura had given birth to Lucinda she had gotten a embroyo from someone she had once worked for. But this secret was not revealed yet. And as time goes on as Lucinda moves and lives in the town of Salem after moving there from a little town near a place called Oakdale this secret will explode. And all will be revealed that Lucinda is the daughter of one of the richest men in Salem and a certain woman that he fell in love with many years later from Lucy's birth.
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Post by Kpatch on Oct 13, 2012 6:54:19 GMT -5
Welcome back DreamsMagically.
Thanks for the intriguing new story. I have a good guess who Lucinda's parents are. I'll keep my guess to myself for now, but I'm looking forward to reading more.
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Post by MrsM on Oct 13, 2012 9:36:24 GMT -5
Ooh, sounds interesting!!!! Can't wait to read it!!
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Post by krw627 on Oct 13, 2012 11:23:19 GMT -5
Me too jkjpatch...I wonder if we're thinking of the same people.
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Post by Kpatch on Oct 13, 2012 11:24:40 GMT -5
I bet we are, Kristin!
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Post by BrightlyShines on Oct 13, 2012 12:09:00 GMT -5
Thank you. And I can't wait to write more.
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Post by fluffysmom on Oct 13, 2012 13:27:05 GMT -5
So intriguing. Looking forward to reading more.
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Post by BrightlyShines on Oct 14, 2012 22:54:46 GMT -5
Note: The idea came to me. But the characters from the show don’t belong to me. There is a mention of a town from another soap and a character that Lucinda was named after. I did make up a few characters like Lu, Valeria, and Rosaura.Chapter 1A fight a top of the Horton Square stairs. Yelling and screaming mainly from one person and not the other. Then the unthinkable happened a secret was revealed and then an accident... or maybe not so much of an accident at all. 3 months... earlier.... Lucinda Hernandez was packing her bags she had lived near a town called Oakdale all her life. She had been named after Lucinda Walsh of Oakdale, because her mom liked how powerful and how Lucinda and bettered herself from who she once was. But there was an emptiness that Lucinda Hernandez had that she didn't understand at all in her heart. She decided to leave home and leave a note for her mother. And there was another reason that Lucinda or should I say Lu wanted to leave home... that reason was her cousin Valeria. Valeria had always been very cold toward her... but things had changed something she didn't understand had made her outright mean. She left that day leaving a note that said. Lu:"Mama,
I am going to go on a trip. Please don't be upset I have to do this. I can't handle this treatment from Valeria anymore. She well you know it's getting worse. So I have decided to go visit some family I haven't seen in awhile. I am going to go see Rafe and Gabi. I have to do this... please don't stop me. I am 17 years old and I can do this.
Love,
Lucinda." Lucinda gathers her things and leaves. She catches a bus to Salem and arrives early one morning. She makes her way to Horton square and loves it there. It is exactly how Gabi described it to her. She goes searching for Rafe and Gabi she ends up at the Brady Pub where she knows Gabi works. Gabi walks into the dining area and gives the the food to Maggie and Victor who were in there. Lucinda looks at Gabi and she smiles and sets the food down at Maggie and Victor's table then she runs and hugs her cousin. Maggie and Victor look up and see this. Gabi: "My dear sweet cousin I have missed you so." Lu: "I have missed you too!" Gabi and Lu look at eachother and smile. Gabi: "Here I want you to meet two people that live here in Salem." They walk over to Maggie and Victor's table. Gabi: "This is Maggie and Victor Kiriakis. This is my cousin Lucinda Hernandez." Gabi then looks at her cousin. Lu: "Nice to meet you." She shakes each of their hands. Lucinda feels something that she has never ever felt in her life... why did she feel so at home in Salem all the sudden! To be continued... I will try to post every weekend![/i]
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Post by MrsM on Oct 15, 2012 7:13:49 GMT -5
Great start!! Can't wait for more!!
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Post by fluffysmom on Oct 15, 2012 12:32:59 GMT -5
I really like the beginning and am looking forward to where the story goes.
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Post by BrightlyShines on Oct 21, 2012 17:04:12 GMT -5
When Maggie and Victor meet Lucinda Hernandez they are happy to meet her and smile. As she walks away Maggie looks at Victor and says.
Maggie: "She seems like such a nice girl. Salem should be happy to have her here."
Victor: "Yes... nice girl."
Victor smiles at Maggie and touches her hand. Lucinda then goes and meets Caroline, Kayla, and Nick. They seem to be happy to meet her as well. Caroline can already tell just by talking to Lu that she could be a good and hard worker. Caroline then offers her job at the pub and Lu so happy.
Lu: "You really mean it? That is so kind of you. Yes, I will accept the job. Thank you so much."
Caroline: "Alright, you can stay in the room next to Gabi's and no loud music or partying."
Gabi laughs
Gabi: "Oh don't worry about her my cousin doesn't party... she is very boring."
Lu gives her cousin a look and pushes her shoulder... and then laughs.
Lu: "Well you were boring the last time I checked... has something changed?"
Nick looks at Gabi and she looks at him. Then Gabi looks at Lu.
Gabi: "Well I have had my moments... but that's a story on it's own that I am sure you don't want to hear."
Lu is a bit confused, but shakes it off. She knows that if her cousin wants to tell her all about it she will and if not that was okay too. She smiles and moves to pick her suitcase up stops and grabs her wrist and moves it around with her other hand. Lu acts like it hurts a little concerned Caroline notices as does Nick and Gabi.
Caroline: "Are you alright?"
Lu: "Yes...I.. I am alright..."
Gabi gets kind of mad.
Gabi: "What did Valeria do to your wrist?!"
Lucinda looks away
Lu: "I don't want to talk about it!"
Gabi: "Tell me right now! She did something and I want to know!"
Lu turns and looks at Gabi with a tear running down her face. She flashes back to 2 weeks before. Valeria grabs Lu and pulls on her wrist. As it goes Lu was promised a big party for her birthday. Valeria is the jealous type, but as time has gone on she gets more angry like Valeria doesn't even accept Lucinda as family anymore. It all started as Valeria found important papers that Rosaura had hidden away. She became worse then. This makes Lu upset and confused what has changed so much?
Valeria: "Why do you always get what you want? WHY? THIS IS MY FAMILY NOT..."
Rosaura comes running in and pushes Valeria away.
Rosaura: "You don't know what you are talking about! Valeria get out of my house now!"
Rosaura holds her daughter as Lu is very upset. Then Lu comes back from the flashback to that moment Gabi looks at Lu. Rafe comes into the pub and listens.
Gabi: "Lu! Did Valeria do this to you?"
Lu: "Yes... she did."
Lu looks at Gabi.
Gabi: "Well she won't now because now you are in Salem. We will make sure that you are alright."
Rafe: "Yes... that's right you will be just fine here now."
Lu turns and looks at Rafe and smiles and hugs her cousins Rafe and Gabi. Lu already felt safe here and Salem... and knew she could be very happy.
To be continued... I will try to post every weekend!
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Post by MrsM on Oct 21, 2012 20:14:05 GMT -5
Great chapter!!
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Post by fluffysmom on Oct 21, 2012 20:39:47 GMT -5
Poor Lu. Glad she's in Salem now. I really liked the chapter.
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Post by gapeach on Oct 23, 2012 15:19:56 GMT -5
Loving this story so far. Can't wait to have more secrets revealed.
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