Alice's Secrets (Read 6,051 times)

[krw627]

Another great story!!

[sportsgirl]

I also forgot that you solved the Halloween mystery.. That has never been brought up on the show, even though it was probably Jack.

[rockfordfosgate]

So many great lines. Princess Katerina, Bill being a fox and everyone agreeing, the 45 other states, he's not a prize want him back?

When I hit the part about the candlestick maker, I just about died laughing. You even tied up a 'forgotten' story with the mysterious Halloween costume-wearer. Brilliant, just brilliant!

[Kpatch]

Thanks so much for reading this fun little story. Sounds like you all liked the humor and that makes me very happy.

I actually tried to write the story as a straight drama and I couldn't do it. Bo and Hope have been buffoons lately and I couldn't write them any which way but stupid. Adding Dick and Molly to introduce the story helped me bring it all together.

Next up: Tune in tomorrow for the start of History Lessons, a Jack & Jennifer fanfic for J&J fans and non-fans alike.

[MrsM]

Yay!! Can't wait!!!!!

[djm]

Thanks for the great story. I agree that Bill is a fox as well. 48 states??? Think I will have to go and look at a map again. Love that Dan and Mel have to give back the Christmas ornament. Oh I will add a mumber 1 to the order.

[mae00]

Awesome story jkjpatch!!! Love the way it ended........with the exception that Carly is still around **hint, hint**

[Trey]

Love it! Great finale and love the "we/I knows" regarding the fox comment.