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Post by jaysdelina on Sept 26, 2011 11:31:31 GMT -5
I can't wait for the bonus chapter.Great story so far jkjpatch,thank you!
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Post by Kpatch on Sept 26, 2011 12:19:02 GMT -5
But first, a little visual aid...PHILIP’S CONDO He lifted Stephanie off the couch and carried her into his bedroom. The feel of her silky smooth skin brushing against his arms as Philip put her down on his bed turned him on all over again. This time he’s not in a rush though. This time, he had the time to look at Stephanie’s body and was struck by how young she looked. How delicate. Stephanie sat up on her knees and started kissing Philip’s chest feverishly. He took a deep breath to control his physical responses. He reached for Stephanie’s chin and lifted her face toward his, beckoning her to kiss him. But instead of kissing her lips, he teasingly rubbed his nose against her cheek, her neck, her shoulder. As he gently pushed her back on the bed, his nose traveled downward toward her breast and he kissed one while carressing the other. Her body arched and she whispered his name. “Philip.” He let his chest glide against hers as he moved his body on top of hers. She slipped her arms around him and he kissed her lips, softly, just once and he smiled. Philip: I’ve never known anyone like you. Stephanie: I’ll bet you say that to all the girls. Philip quickly realized that conversation could only serve to kill the moment, so he took her lips in his mouth and held her tongue. Stephanie: Oooh. I want you Philip. Philip: Now that’s what I want to hear. Philip’s lips locked with Stephanie’s and his arms enfolded her. He could feel her heart pounding as he held her closer, closer, and closer until their bodies became one. To be continued ...
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Post by MrsM on Sept 26, 2011 13:09:22 GMT -5
I swear I LOVE you bonus chapters!! Made this rainy day much better!!!
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Post by ghoulgirl on Sept 26, 2011 13:19:34 GMT -5
Oh man these bonus chapters are like, the best thing since sliced bread! HAHA Thanks jkjpatch! And for the visual aid. Too bad I am at work and am dying for that hose right now!
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Post by fluffysmom on Sept 26, 2011 15:14:01 GMT -5
Terrific chapters Kpatch! I agree with Mrs M. You definitely brightened up a rainy dreary day. I hope Philip can remember which name belongs to which girl or he could end up in an awkward situation. I love bonus chapters!!
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Post by bradydiva06 on Sept 26, 2011 18:18:34 GMT -5
Wow now that was some phinie hotness. I loved that the bedroom scenes were slower and very intimate. It reminded me of the their first time like you previewed with the picture. Great job with this story hon. I'm loving it.
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Post by jaysdelina on Sept 26, 2011 21:48:35 GMT -5
Great bonus chapter,hope to see more of them
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Post by ghoulgirl on Sept 26, 2011 21:56:43 GMT -5
Yes, I hope they sneak their ways into just about every single story
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Post by Kpatch on Sept 27, 2011 3:41:04 GMT -5
Thanks for the great feedback guys. With that kind of encouragement, there are likely to going to be more bonus chapters in our future!
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Post by Kpatch on Sept 27, 2011 3:44:37 GMT -5
TITAN HEADQUARTERS
Melanie came out from behind closed doors with Philip. Melanie: I think we have a winner. It’s better than Book Keepers anyway. Philip: I’m not convinced. Why don’t you do a quick and dirty survey and see what consumers think of the name. Mimi: Hi Philip! Philip: Meems. Mimi kisses Philip on the cheek. Philip: What are you doing here? Mimi: I was in the neighborhood. Wanna grab some lunch? Philip looks at his watch. Philip: I have a meeting at 2:00, but sure. Why don’t we go upstairs to the Penthouse Grill since it’s close by. Mimi: Sounds good to me. Philip: Let me get my jacket. I’ll be right back. Meanwhile, Melanie eyes Mimi with suspicion and disdain. Mimi: Can I help you? Melanie: Ha. I seriously doubt it. Philip comes back to the reception area. Philip: Ready to go? Mimi: You bet. Philip: Marie, I’ve got my cell. Call if you need me. Marie: Yes Mr. Kiriakis. Have a good lunch.
PENTHOUSE GRILL
Mimi: So I wondered what was on fire when you ran out of the reunion a couple weeks ago. Philip: Oh that. I didn’t mean to be rude to you. Mimi: No worries. Philip: So how are? You’re looking good. Great, in fact. Mimi: Wow. Coming from you, that’s a huge compliment. Philip: You seeing anyone? Mimi: Actually ... I was planning to seduce you. Philip laughs. Mimi: That wasn’t a joke. Philip: Seriously? Come on Meems. Mimi: What? Why not? Why is that so hard to believe? I mean, you and me. Philip: Mimi, you’re too nice a girl. Mimi: Maybe I’m trying to shed that nice-girl image. Philip: Well don’t do it. And be grateful you’re not involved with me. Mimi: Are you kidding? Every woman wants to be with you. Philip: Until they get to know me. Mimi: Huh? Philip: My life is so damn complicated right now. I just need a few more weeks and I’m outta here. I’m going back to Brazil. Mimi: What’s making your life so complicated? Philip: Women. Mimi: Oh. Philip: Too many of them. Mimi: Anyone I know? Philip doesn’t answer. Mimi: Aha. Chloe’s back in the picture, isn’t she? Philip: What makes you say that? Mimi: Because ... you’ve always had thing for her. Philip: Had. Past tense. Mimi: Are you sure? If Chloe walked by our table, you’d forget I was even in the room. Am I right? Or am I right? Philip: You’re probably right. And I would need my head examined. Mimi: I wish I was more like Chloe. Philip: No you don’t. Don’t ever change, Mimi.
To be continued ...
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Post by djm on Sept 27, 2011 4:43:03 GMT -5
Thanks for the bonus chapter yesterday. It was so amazing. Loved the love scene.
Mimi's back in the picture. So glad to see he r back. Wow Chloe, Stephanie, Melanie, and Mimi. You can guess who I want to end up with Philip. Thanks for the chapter Kpatch.
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Post by MrsM on Sept 27, 2011 7:56:08 GMT -5
Never expected Mimi. Great chapter kpatch!!
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Post by sportsgirl on Sept 27, 2011 8:07:51 GMT -5
Ah, so this was the mystery woman. So glad they aren't doing the sex thing with them. They need to stay good friends only. I really need to read those bonus chapters at home though... ;D
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Post by jaysdelina on Sept 27, 2011 9:34:30 GMT -5
I liked the exchange between Philip and Mimi.Odd in a sweet sort of way,lol.I loved how direct she was in her intentions toward him,but I loved the way Philip discouraged it by letting her know she was too nice a girl.Most guys wouldn't discourage so nicely.
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Post by Trey on Sept 27, 2011 10:16:38 GMT -5
Man, if this keeps up, Phil is going to be batting them away. Can't blame the female population though. ;D
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