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Post by heroicmuse on Jan 26, 2015 22:09:06 GMT -5
Aww so sweet. Love seeing Victor's softer side! Great story unavitasegreta! |
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Post by Kpatch on Jan 26, 2015 22:52:41 GMT -5
Oh my. This chapter was like one of those old-timey bedroom farces with all the phones flying and not knowing who was on which phone. I have to know what Victor said to Parker!?!?! That was such a charming wonderful enjoyable read unavitasegreta. Thank you! There was only one part I didn't like. The part where it said "The End." Hated that part. |
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Post by unavitasegreta on Jan 26, 2015 23:19:07 GMT -5
It's a Kiriakis secret, Kpatch. I don't think Parker is going to talk. You may have better luck with Victor, but I doubt it! Thanks to everyone for the kind words and for reading. You guys do so much around here to make this place insanely fun and such a rare DOOL universe where no fighting and bickering exists that I'm glad I could give back a little bit. I have no clue when the story will be done (a few weeks, maybe?) but there is a Philip/Stephanie story in the works. |
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Post by fluffysmom on Jan 27, 2015 10:59:29 GMT -5
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Post by krw627 on Jan 28, 2015 13:48:25 GMT -5
What a fun story! The Kiriakis, except for Victor (and sometimes Maggie), are my least favorite family on the show, but your story made them lovable!!
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Post by UhSir on Feb 28, 2015 2:34:09 GMT -5
Another keeper!
I forgot to make notes on each chapter but here's what I did write down:
Chapter Two: Typical Victor, just leave Chloe laying there. Then he's worried about getting wax on the marble. But when he and Chloe really start up the bickering I was laughing so much I couldn't read!
Chapter Four: Maggie telling Victor he has the world fooled but not her. So true, and he knows it.
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