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Post by rahma2701 on Sept 26, 2014 9:04:10 GMT -5
awww LOVE!!
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Post by fluffysmom on Sept 26, 2014 10:17:24 GMT -5
This is the perfect ending to a terrific story. Thanks for taking us on this journey Kpatch.
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Post by unavitasegreta on Sept 26, 2014 20:41:51 GMT -5
I am sad that I have nothing to check every morning when I awaken. But the ending was perfect. I love the idea of them going home to Chicago and moving on as a family. It is such a fitting end for this long, challenging journey they've been on for the past two decades. Beautifully done!
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Post by Kpatch on Sept 26, 2014 21:04:37 GMT -5
Suppose it's not over? Thanks everyone for your great comments and sticking with the journey. It means more than I can say when you take the time to read and comment! However, I could not end the story there. Philip still has some splaining to do and Chloe needs her memory back. So I guess you could say that was just a break. The last part of the story is called Stealing Home and it will begin on Monday with maybe a little teaser or something over the weekend.
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Post by unavitasegreta on Sept 26, 2014 21:08:50 GMT -5
By 'little teaser', I hope you mean 'sex scene'. (Does that comment make me a dirty old lady? Oh well. If the shoe fits ...)
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Post by Kpatch on Sept 26, 2014 21:17:01 GMT -5
Sorry, no. Perhaps preview would have been a better description in this instance.
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Post by melly on Sept 26, 2014 21:28:19 GMT -5
WEEKEND PREVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by fluffysmom on Sept 26, 2014 21:32:43 GMT -5
I can hardly wait to read more. Thanks Kpatch.
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Post by unavitasegreta on Sept 26, 2014 21:47:47 GMT -5
I suppose I can settle for a preview. ;-)
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Post by phloefansince2000 on Sept 27, 2014 9:26:09 GMT -5
Absolutely loved the ending so happy Chloe avoided the past! Phloe are finally back together you made our wish come true Kpatch! Thanks so much! There's more OMG can't wait!
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Post by MrsM on Oct 1, 2014 15:07:52 GMT -5
Awwwww!!!! Great ending/beginning of the next installment!
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Post by jadaysfan on May 31, 2015 2:26:38 GMT -5
I only just started this story, but I'm liking it so far. I'm around page 8 when Nancy tells Chloe that Joy's been dating a hoodlum! What I wouldn't give to see that all played onscreen for reals! *big sigh* Hope it's okay to comment here....as I'm only on page 8 so far...thanks KPatch!
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Post by Kpatch on Jun 1, 2015 5:59:43 GMT -5
I only just started this story, but I'm liking it so far. I'm around page 8 when Nancy tells Chloe that Joy's been dating a hoodlum! What I wouldn't give to see that all played onscreen for reals! *big sigh* Hope it's okay to comment here....as I'm only on page 8 so far...thanks KPatch! Of course it's okay. Glad you're enjoying it.
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Post by Kpatch on Jan 28, 2021 9:30:39 GMT -5
Thank you, meemz for letting me know that a link to a steamy offsite chapter was broken. I fixed the link and started rereading this story and OMG I couldn't put it down. Excuse the self-promotion, but if you like good old fashioned soapy drama, this has it in spades. I recommend reading this story if you haven't had the chance, or even if you have. It's fun to read anew! It's part of a series, but it works as a stand-alone as well.
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Post by meemz on Jan 29, 2021 0:37:34 GMT -5
Thank you, meemz for letting me know that a link to a steamy offsite chapter was broken. I fixed the link and started rereading this story and OMG I couldn't put it down. Excuse the self-promotion, but if you like good old fashioned soapy drama, this has it in spades. I recommend reading this story if you haven't had the chance, or even if you have. It's fun to read anew! It's part of a series, but it works as a stand-alone as well. It is an amazing story Kpatch once you start you cant STOP!!!! Gosh i find myself distracted at work wanting to know what will happen !! Also kpatch There is another link ch 93b that does not work. Hehe these links take cliffhanger to another level
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