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Post by MrsM on May 25, 2011 9:43:24 GMT -5
Just no close-ups please!!
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Post by DancingDays on May 25, 2011 10:53:53 GMT -5
Or at the very least, using protection..You can do a product placement for Trojans. ;D Best. Product placement idea. Ever. |
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Post by Tom Horton on May 25, 2011 14:08:10 GMT -5
Ugh Kpatch, groddy!! I knew it, I just knew the sleazy doc would contaminate Jennifer! I feel a bait-and-switch has happened with this story, you lure us in with the good stuff and then this... bad Kpatch, bad (J/K).  |
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Post by fluffysmom on May 25, 2011 17:49:33 GMT -5
I am just shocked that he can actually make it to the bedroom! He and Chloe rarely got past the couch!
I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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Post by melly on May 25, 2011 19:53:31 GMT -5
I think I just threw up in my mouth. EW. She's totally going to catch some nasty disease...
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Post by sportsgirl on May 25, 2011 20:54:49 GMT -5
But if she does, Dr Dan is super Doc and will cure her and she will love him even more!!!
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Post by Kpatch on May 26, 2011 4:07:15 GMT -5
DANIEL’S APARTMENT, THE NEXT MORNING
Jennifer is getting dressed as Daniel wakes up.
Daniel: Hey, what are you doing? Come back to bed.
Jennifer: I can’t.
Daniel: Why not?
Jennifer: I have a meeting. And Melanie will probably be home soon.
Daniel: So what? She knows about the birds and the bees.
Jennifer: I’m sure she does, but I’d still feel a little weird about it.
Daniel: It didn’t feel weird last night. Or did it?
Jennifer: No, not at all. It felt right.
Daniel holds out his hand and beckons Jennifer to come over to the bed. She smiles and sits at the edge of the bed next to him. He takes her hand.
Daniel: I didn’t think I’d ever feel this way again.
Jennifer: What way?
Daniel: Like I would ever trust a woman enough that I would want to give her my heart.
Jennifer laughs.
Jennifer: Well you already gave my own heart back to me.
Daniel: So now you have yours and mine. Can you handle that?
Jennifer: I think so. I’ll try to be careful with it.
Daniel: I have a feeling it’s in good hands.
They kiss. Daniel’s beeper, which is sitting on the nightstand, goes off.
Jennifer: I hope that beeping means that kissing me excites you.
Daniel laughs, picks up the beeper and looks at the display.
Daniel: It does. Unfortunately, duty calls. I’m needed for an emergency consultation.
Jennifer: Then we’ll have to pick this up another time.
Daniel: Definitely.
To be continued ...
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Post by MrsM on May 26, 2011 7:10:15 GMT -5
Oh no. I can see the emergency being bad for Jennifer. I hope my bad feeling is wrong!!
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Post by DancingDays on May 26, 2011 8:31:09 GMT -5
No, no. This emergency is VERY good for Jenn!!! But, I will say, this after-glow scene sounded very sweet. It's totally in character for both of them. Well done kpatch! And thank you for sparing us the gory details of their first night together. Then again, I guess that would be for a different fanfic site. |
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Post by djm on May 26, 2011 8:49:00 GMT -5
Thanks Kpatch. Jen and Daniel are just so sweet together. They make a nice couple. If only Daniel was a different type of man. Wonder if the ER consult has to do with Jack. Just loving this story.
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Post by André DiMera on May 26, 2011 9:45:46 GMT -5
While I do like Jennifer, I'm not a big fan of Daniel.
i wonder what tis emergency could be?
Great story, jkjpatch! I'm enjoying it! Especially the scenes with either Bill or Lucas (or both!)
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Post by MrsM on May 26, 2011 9:58:58 GMT -5
I am just worried the emergency has something to do with Bill....
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Post by DancingDays on May 26, 2011 10:04:51 GMT -5
Ooooooh! I forgot Bill was in town!! I kept thinking it was gonna be Jack. Not Bill!!!!
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Post by Tom Horton on May 26, 2011 15:53:20 GMT -5
 ....  , you always write well J, even when I don't care for the subject matter .... I'm hoping that Daniel's emergency leads to the reason that Jennifer does in fact end up breaking his heart (such as it is) ... I don't like Daniel and I don't want good things for him.
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Post by fluffysmom on May 26, 2011 20:35:35 GMT -5
I liked the chapter Kpatch. I am wondering who the emergency will involve?!
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, you always write well J, even when I don't care for the subject matter .... I'm hoping that Daniel's emergency leads to the reason that Jennifer does in fact end up breaking his heart (such as it is) ... I don't like Daniel and I don't want good things for him.