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Post by André DiMera on Mar 28, 2012 18:39:07 GMT -5
This story, the second half of a story that started a few months ago, will be written slightly differently than it's predecessor. It will still be written in the normal "script" form, but from time to time, it will be written from the point of view of Syydney writing in her journal. As with the first "Summer Breeze", this story takes place 14 years into the future, so all of today's children are either teens or young adults. Hope you enjoy! Previews The summer is going by quickly. SYDNEY: Hi. CERI: Hi. And plans are being made. CLAIRE: I wonder what college I should go to. Some good... PHILIP: Beach party. *Melanie tears off Philip's shirt as they kiss* And some not so good... JOHNNY: Excellent. The End of Summer draws near. CERI: Wanna dance? Summer Breeze II: The End of Summer Starting April 2nd
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Post by sportsgirl on Mar 28, 2012 19:09:47 GMT -5
YAY!! Andre's back!! Hope you had fun in Australia and I also anxiously await April 2nd....
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Post by MrsM on Mar 28, 2012 19:14:29 GMT -5
Yay!! Can't wait for the story and the trip report!!
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Post by Kpatch on Mar 28, 2012 19:21:22 GMT -5
Welcome back! I missed you and your stories!
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Post by fluffysmom on Mar 28, 2012 20:54:52 GMT -5
I missed you my friend. Glad to have you back. I'm eager to read the new story and hear about your trip.
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Post by Minako98 on Mar 29, 2012 6:24:29 GMT -5
Yay!!! Welcome back! I hope you had a wonderful vacation!
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Post by André DiMera on Mar 31, 2012 7:58:01 GMT -5
Thanks, guys! My trip was awesome! Details to come in a few days! Casting Two more young adults will be appearing in this story. The first one is played by Corbin Bleu. He will be portraying Ciara's boyfriend. For info on who Ciara's boyfriend is, check one of the earliest chapters of "Summer Breeze" The second is a character who hasn't been seen or mentioned in a long time. She has connections to Parker. This character will be played by Brie Larson
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Post by Kpatch on Mar 31, 2012 11:01:14 GMT -5
Thanks for the promo photos, Andre. Looking forward to your fanfic, as well as hearing the details of your trip!
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Post by fluffysmom on Mar 31, 2012 14:25:16 GMT -5
Thanks for posting the pics Andre. I'm eager to read the new fic and hear about your awesome trip.
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Post by sportsgirl on Mar 31, 2012 14:48:14 GMT -5
Make that 3!!
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Post by André DiMera on Apr 2, 2012 6:57:50 GMT -5
Chapter 1 Remember when you were a kid and it was the last day of school? How happy you were that the school year was over? How excited you were that summer was beginning? That you were finally free from homework, quizzes, tests, teachers, and everything else to do with the educational world for an entire three months? I never was. Maybe it's because I'm so different from everybody else. Because I'm so weird. But, I think it's mostly because of my daddy and the things he did to me. It wasn't always bad. I wasn't always at his house to be used as a pin cushion. Sometimes, I would stay with my mommy and Lucas. But, mommy never really had time to listen to me when I would tell her what daddy would do to me. The only time during summer I was actually happy was when I was with Grandma Marlena and Grandpa John. They were more like parents to me than my real parents. I would be happy when I was around my older brother, Will, too. But, the rest of the time, even after daddy died, I wasn't happy during summer. I don't know why, I just wasn't.PHILIP & MELANIE'S APARTMENT Philip walked down the stairs. Melanie was in the kitchen, cleaning up after dinner. PHILIP: I've been thinking... MELANIE: Didn't hurt yourself, did you? Philip chuckled. PHILIP: Very funny. It was a close thing. But, in all seriousness, I've been thinking about Parker and your nieces and the rest of the kids. And, I thought, since it's the beginning of August, and they go back to school September 1st, that we should work on something to give all of the kids going back to school this year a bit of an end of summer party. MELANIE: Go on. PHILIP: Here's what I'm thinking: the weekend before school starts again, you and me, plus some of the other parents, host an End of Summer Beach Party. MELANIE: Sounds good. I have an idea, too. Melanie walked over to Philip and they kissed. PHILIP: Hm, I like the way you think, Mrs. Kiriakis. The two continue kissing. Melanie ripped off Philip's shirt. The two moved upstairs. As they got to the bedroom, Philip made sure to put up the Do Not Disturb sign that they had gotten, just in case. DIMERA MANSION Johnny was walking around, talking on his cell phone. JOHNNY: No, it's got to be perfect. It's got to be the best in can possibly be. And, she's gotta be hot. Pause. JOHNNY: No, I don't care how long it takes. Just get her to me. Pause. JOHNNY; Excellent. I knew you wouldn't let me down.
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Post by Kpatch on Apr 2, 2012 10:11:57 GMT -5
The excerpt from Sydney's journal is so sad. It gave me chills.
I love Philip's idea of an end-of-summer beach party!
I think Johnny is ordering a new car.
Super start, Andre!
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Post by slyn11 on Apr 2, 2012 10:21:27 GMT -5
Any story that starts with Philip getting naked is a winner.
I thought Johnny was ordering himself a woman. Lol
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Post by fluffysmom on Apr 2, 2012 11:14:43 GMT -5
Great start Andre. Poor Sydney has been in such torment. Can't wait to see what Johnny is up to.
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Post by sportsgirl on Apr 2, 2012 11:32:42 GMT -5
Great start Andre...Poor Sydney and what she has had to endure....
Hmmm, car or gal??? I'll go with car!
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