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Post by Sparkster on Jan 17, 2012 9:40:05 GMT -5
Poor Carrie. I feel really bad for her. Wow, Austin is a jerk!  |
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Post by peppermint on Jan 17, 2012 9:56:30 GMT -5
Love it...... so glad you're continuing the story. I'm really enjoying the Austin/Carrie background... so good!!!
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Post by gapeach on Jan 17, 2012 10:05:54 GMT -5
Poor Carrie. I feel really bad for her. Wow, Austin is a jerk! I feel sorry for Carrie as well, but going after her sister's husband is just not right!! |
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Post by mae00 on Jan 17, 2012 10:08:29 GMT -5
Poor Carrie!! I feel so bad for her b/c Austin is such a jerk. But Rafe IS a married man.......even tho Sami does not deserve him at all!
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Post by Kpatch on Jan 17, 2012 12:09:10 GMT -5
Wow, Carrie really spilled some personal stuff to Rafe. It almost sounds like she is trying to get him to feel sorry for her, like men do when they tell a woman that "my wife doesn't understand me."
I loved finding out what happened during their years in Switzerland. Thanks for the chapter, DD.
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Post by fluffysmom on Jan 17, 2012 18:04:48 GMT -5
Great chapter DD. I liked learning what took place in Switzerland.
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Post by DancingDays on Jan 18, 2012 9:40:29 GMT -5
SALEM HOTEL, ROOM 7233
Carrie is on the phone with Austin.
CARRIE: Hi honey!
AUSTIN: Hey! I’ve only got a minute. Got a meeting coming up that I need to get ready for. What’s up?
CARRIE: Oh, not much. Just wanted to hear your voice.
AUSTIN: Well, I wish I could talk more, but I’ve really got to go. Love you honey. (Click)
CARRIE: (Looks at the receiver) Yeah. Bye. (Sets the phone down)
Carrie looks around the room. A feeling of utter despair washes over her as she is faced with the emptiness in her life. She sinks onto the bed and gives into a crying jag. Within minutes she has cried herself to sleep.
Carrie and Rafe are in a hotel room in New York. They stand on a balcony that overlooks Central Park. It is close to midnight. Standing behind her, Rafe has his arms wrapped around Carrie. They each are loosely wearing robes.
RAFE: (Whispers) This is such a beautiful place.
CARRIE: (Sighs) It is, isn’t it?
RAFE: Of course, it’s even more beautiful because you’re here.
CARRIE: (Turns to face him) I could say the same thing about you.
RAFE: (Kisses her lightly) Mmmm. Come back to bed.
CARRIE: (Eyes sparkling) You got it.
His mouth covers hers in a torrent of kisses, his tongue slipping between her open lips. She opens completely to him and he drinks and drinks as if there is no tomorrow. He breaks the kiss, pressing his lips against her cheeks, her throat, whispering loving words in her ear. She is overcome with passion and her knees quickly turn to jelly. Sensing her weakness, he literally sweeps her off her feet and gently lays her on the bed. As he leans over her, she sweeps her hands over the hard expanse of his chest. She is desperate to touch every inch of him as if he might disappear in an instant. He takes her exposed breast in his mouth and teases her nipple with his tongue. A husky moan escapes her throat, urging him onward. At that sound, he loses all control and can no longer restrain himself. His mouth and hands roam all over her body. He positions himself over her and enters her quickly. In that one thrust, Carrie plunges over the edge. She curls her nails into Rafe’s shoulders and cries out his name. With one more thrust, Rafe goes over the edge with her.
CARRIE: (Sleepily) Mmm, Rafe?
Carrie reaches out. The only thing she feels is the cool, empty bed and, as she wakes fully, she realizes that her most amazing sexual experience was only a dream. Her body is still tingling, though, as if it was real and she revels in that long lost feeling of satisfaction. She pushes the sadness away for as long as she can. But eventually she is overcome with loneliness. She curls into a ball and drifts off to dreamless sleep.
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Post by mae00 on Jan 18, 2012 9:47:33 GMT -5
WOW!!! That was some dream!!!
Think I better break out the hoses again.......
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Post by sportsgirl on Jan 18, 2012 9:54:12 GMT -5
Poor Carrie! She needs to buy herself a puppy! That will keep her from lusting after her sister's husband... ;D
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Post by Kpatch on Jan 18, 2012 10:14:20 GMT -5
Now I know what "M" stands for: Mmmmm.
I didn't know Rafe had it in him. I may never look at him the same way again. Extremely satisfying chapter, thanks DD!
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Post by peppermint on Jan 18, 2012 11:06:26 GMT -5
Whewwwww! Very, very nicely done!!  |
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Post by MrsM on Jan 18, 2012 12:09:40 GMT -5
Yowza!!! I want her dreams!!!
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Post by fluffysmom on Jan 18, 2012 14:49:39 GMT -5
Loved the chapter DD! More please...
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Post by DancingDays on Jan 19, 2012 9:47:07 GMT -5
CASA DE HERNANDEZ (RAFE AND SAMI’S LOFT)
SAME EVENING
Sami and Rafe are cleaning up after dinner. The kids have already gone to bed.
RAFE: I can’t believe those little monsters are asleep already.
SAMI: I drugged their drinks with Benadryl. I wanted to make sure they fell asleep quickly. (Laughs at Rafe’s shocked expression) I’m kidding! They were completely worn out from their day at school.
RAFE: Ha. Why don’t I believe you?
SAMI: (playfully slaps his arm) You know they went to the zoo today.
RAFE: I know. I’m just messing with you.
SAMI: Here. Help me put these dishes away and then you can mess with me all night.
RAFE: Yes ma’am.
The dishes are quickly put away and Sami and Rafe go to take a shower together. Rafe starts the shower and gets in alone.
RAFE: The water’s warm, Mrs. Hernandez. You plan on joining me soon?
Carrie steps in.
CARRIE: I’m not Mrs. Hernandez, but will I do?
RAFE: Oh, absolutely.
Unfazed by her sudden appearance, Rafe rubs his soapy hands on Carrie’s shoulders. She, in turn, rubs her soapy hands on his chest. Slowly, her hands dip lower and lower.
RAFE: Oh yes. You’ll do nicely.
SAMI: (Pokes her head in behind the curtain) Who are you talking to in there?
RAFE: (Blinks and Carrie vanishes) You, of course. When are you getting in here?
SAMI: Just a second. Johnny needed a glass of water.
RAFE: You’d better hurry. Water’s getting cold.
He blinks again, but Carrie does not return. Instead, when Sami joins him, he pictures Carrie. At times, he even closes his eyes to make the fantasy easier. When they move to the bed, Rafe is so wrapped up in the fantasy that he doesn’t even need to keep his eyes closed anymore. Carrie is all he sees.
RAFE: (Caresses her body) You are so beautiful.
“CARRIE”: Thank you.
RAFE: It’s all I can do not to devour you.
“CARRIE”: Devour away. I want you to take me.
RAFE: Tell me. Tell me how.
“CARRIE”: I want you touch me everywhere. I want to feel your kisses on my skin. I want you to make love to me like it’s the first time you’ve ever seen me. I want you to make me cry out in ecstasy. I want you.
RAFE: I want you too. Let’s go make some steam.
Even though it’s actually Sami underneath him, Rafe continues to picture Carrie. When he feels the urge to call out her name, he bites his lip instead. He seems almost desperate to take in every inch of her. Like a man possessed, he rains kisses down her neck and onto her breasts. He takes one nipple in his mouth and pulls gently with his teeth. He feels her quiver in excitement and continues his oral exploration. He arrives at the nexus of her desire and takes her into his mouth. She shudders with pleasure and calls out his name. Eager to reach that ever elusive zenith, he sheathes himself in her. With just a few strokes, he explodes. He wants to call her name, “Carrie,” but knows that he cannot. Instead, he lays beside Sami, his body humming with pleasure.
SAMI: Wow. You were just….wow.
RAFE: (Distractedly) Mmm.
SAMI: (Panting) I mean, it’s like I was with someone else.
RAFE: (Whispers, almost silently) Me too.
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Post by mae00 on Jan 19, 2012 9:55:46 GMT -5
WHOA! With this much tension/fantasy, how are these two ever going to be able to get any work done?!
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