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Post by djm on Sept 29, 2011 8:54:08 GMT -5
Wow. I like the first choice that Jan can make. I wonder what the other choice is. Can't wait to find out. Thanks Andre.
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Post by sportsgirl on Sept 29, 2011 9:37:51 GMT -5
I just knew there was going to be a twist... This is sort of like A Christmas Carol with Jacob Marley seeing his life in the future if he stays the miser he is.... The other choice has to be with Jan alive, right???
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Post by Trey on Sept 29, 2011 14:36:13 GMT -5
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Post by André DiMera on Sept 29, 2011 22:27:19 GMT -5
Chapter 5 ST. LUKE'S There are a number of people sitting in the pews. All are dressed in black. In the front row are Shawn-D and Jan. Jan is crying and Shawn-D has his arm around her. Father Jansen is giving a sermon. We can't hear any of the words, but we can imagine what he might be saying. THE LOFT It is now a few days later. Shawn-D is sitting on the couch. Jan walks in. JAN: She's not in her crib. SHAWN-D: What? JAN: Shauna. She's not in her crib. SHAWN-D: Of ourse she's not. JAN: Why isn't she in her crib? SHAWN-D: What are you talking about? JAN: Shawn, why isn't Shauna in her crib? Shawn-D stared at Jan. SHAWN-D: Are you all right? JAN: Of course I am. Why wouldn't I be? SHAWN-D: You seem kind of...different. JAN: What do you mean? SHAWN-D: There's something about you that's not quite right. JAN: I don't know what you're talking about. Anyway, I'm going to go wake up Shauna from her nap now. It's time for her to have lunch. Jan walked upstairs. SHAWN-D: But, Jan, Shauna's... Jan ignored him and continued walking upstairs. Shawn-D got out his cell phone and dialed a number. SHAWN-D: Dr. Evans, this is Shawn. Can you come to the loft, please? I think there's something wrong with Jan. |
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Post by fluffysmom on Sept 29, 2011 23:07:07 GMT -5
I wonder if Shauna is the one who died in this choice. Great story Andre. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Post by ghoulgirl on Sept 29, 2011 23:38:12 GMT -5
Oh boy. This is getting better by the chapter! Looking forward to
More!!!
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Post by MrsM on Sept 30, 2011 6:50:55 GMT -5
Wow. That is every parents nightmare choice. Between yourself and your child.
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Post by sportsgirl on Sept 30, 2011 7:40:15 GMT -5
OMG, that was the choice. Either she dies or her child.. This is so tragic Poor Jan! But she made the wrong choice as she will be devastated by this. She may even wind up back in the mental hospital as this could just set her back. |
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Post by djm on Sept 30, 2011 10:30:49 GMT -5
Wow. I don't like this choice. No parent should have to chose like this. I did like the Belle and Shown together again choice A. Thanks for the chapter Andre. Waiting to see what happens next. Previews Please.
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Post by gapeach on Sept 30, 2011 15:47:30 GMT -5
Okay the choices are... Jan stays dead and Shawn D remarries Belle or Jan lives and their baby dies and Jan hasn't accepted that fact...
Hate to say it, but I kinda pity Jan at the moment.
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Post by ghoulgirl on Sept 30, 2011 17:16:01 GMT -5
Me too. A very hard situation to have to deal with. I would definitely stay dead. My children deserve to live their lives and have a chacne to live.
So awful to have to make that decision.
Looking forward to another installment Andre!
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Post by Kpatch on Sept 30, 2011 19:00:12 GMT -5
Ohhhh. This is like Sophie's Choice, right Andre?
Good story but so sad.
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Post by sportsgirl on Sept 30, 2011 21:40:12 GMT -5
I don't think Jan knew her baby would die if she lived. That's why she is looking for her. I don't feel very good for Jan.
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Post by André DiMera on Sept 30, 2011 22:52:21 GMT -5
Previews Things keep going downhill on Sunday nightJAN: Where is she? On Monday night, a choice must be made JAN: No! Temptation rears its head on Tuesday nightSHAWN-D: Come with me. And tune in on Wednesday night for the finale. JAN: It's about Shawn...where is he? |
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Post by fluffysmom on Sept 30, 2011 23:04:43 GMT -5
Thanks for the previews Andre. It looks like another suspenseful week.
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