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Post by MrsM on Feb 28, 2011 10:11:15 GMT -5
Woo Hoo!! Great start!!!
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Post by Sparkster on Feb 28, 2011 10:12:20 GMT -5
Oh excellent start! I loved EJ's line about ending up in a kpatch story! LOL!! So true. So I wonder where Melanie and Nicole are?  |
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Post by sportsgirl on Feb 28, 2011 12:59:46 GMT -5
How in the world did you get me to read EJ's lines with his british accent?
Yep, off to a great start!!! The Salem cops are already looking like either the Keystone Kops or Toody & Muldoon ;D
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Post by Pallison on Feb 28, 2011 13:12:11 GMT -5
Ah yes, sounds like my kind of story....bring it on woman...!!!!!
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Post by ghoulgirl on Feb 28, 2011 16:24:31 GMT -5
LOL Great start to the story. Cannot wait to read more! I wonder why I cannot see the video. maybe it will work on my home computer. I cannot even see a link or anything to click on...it's just an empty space! Can't wait for tomorrow's installment!!  |
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Post by Kpatch on Mar 1, 2011 4:48:01 GMT -5
KREMEY KRUMPETS DONUT SHOPPE
Roman and Bo are having coffee and donuts when Brady and Philip walk in.
Roman: Hey hey, look who’s here. Join us! Pull up a donut.
Brady: We were told you would be here.
Philip: We need your help.
Bo: We’re sort of busy.
Philip: Melanie’s missing.
Brady: So is Nicole.
Bo: How can you be sure?
Philip: Melanie didn’t come home last night.
Brady: Nicole didn’t come home either. No one has seen them.
Roman: Are you sure they’re not just mad at you?
Philip: Melanie’s always mad at me, but I checked with Carly and Daniel and the hospital, and no one has seen her. Can you help us?
Bo: It has to be at least 24 hours.
Brady: It has been! It’s been more than 24 hours since anyone has seen them.
Roman: What my little brother here means is that you have to wait at least 24 hours after you report their disappearance.
Bo: Good thinking Roman! Bo looks at his watch. So, um, call us back in 24 hours and if they’re still missing, we’ll start a search. Cool?
Brady turns to Philip.
Brady: Looks like we’ll have to take the law into our own hands.
Bo: Damn it Janet! Why are Salemites constantly going rogue on us? Like I said, call us in 24 hours.
Roman: Only 23 hours and 57 minutes left.
Bo: What Roman said.
Brady and Philip leave the donut shop.
To be continued ....
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Post by djm on Mar 1, 2011 5:40:01 GMT -5
I was good Kpatch. I waited till after reading to drink coffee. Just loved the line of has it been more then 24 hours and when Brady and Philip say yes then they change it to 24 hours after reporting the person missing. Boy they look for any excuse not to work and then complain when the people go rogue on them. So looking forward to tomorrow.
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Post by addictedtodool on Mar 1, 2011 11:53:15 GMT -5
Love love love this story already. Gots me some Bo and Roman action going on! Rock on kpatch!
Wow, you even have Elvis down pat! I can see him with the corners of his little pouty mouth turned down with disdain as he addresses Brady. Oooo..this is going ot be good.
Hurry up Wednesday!
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Post by sportsgirl on Mar 1, 2011 12:00:32 GMT -5
Yep, cops just love those donut shops. ;D
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Post by Tom Horton on Mar 1, 2011 12:23:34 GMT -5
LOL to the whole chapter! I especially liked Bo telling Roman quick thinking on saying that it had to be 24 hours after the missing person report is made.
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Post by ghoulgirl on Mar 1, 2011 16:15:44 GMT -5
LOL Another great installment fromthe great jkjpatch! Can't wait for tomorrow's episode./chapter...whatever you call it. LOL
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Post by Pallison on Mar 1, 2011 17:46:51 GMT -5
Who the crap is Janet... ?? |
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Post by Minako98 on Mar 1, 2011 19:47:22 GMT -5
LOL It's a Rocky Horror Picture Show reference.
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Post by Pallison on Mar 1, 2011 20:18:50 GMT -5
It's been about 20 years since I've seen that movie...and boy was it fun....midnight, people in costume, spray bottles, forks, newspapers, and can't remember what else....it was a blast...!!!!
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Post by melly on Mar 1, 2011 20:36:37 GMT -5
Yayayay! So excited for a new story! Thanks, kjkpatch!
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